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Chapter 11: Will Sergio and Trevor's wedding push through?
mfa607 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 11: Will Sergio and Trevor's wedding push through?
YES! Have a feeling though that things are going to turn a bit ugly! Great chapter! Thank you! -
I’m loving this story! Great chapter.
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Loyalty says it all. Great chapter! Thank you!
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Loving this story. Apollo is certainly looking after them all, so far. Thank you!
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Wow! Giada doesn’t play well with other, for sure! Loving this! Great chapter! Thank you. More please!
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What a great chapter. His father is going to lose it! Thank you.
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These mothers are incredibly busy in their son’s lives! Go Eric! Great chapter! Thank you.
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They have a plan. Great chapter!
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Chapter 11: Meet my sister
mfa607 commented on GabrielCaldwell's story chapter in Chapter 11: Meet my sister
Definitely interesting dynamic! I've followed and loved this from the beginning. I'm still wondering if Brian is in or out? He tells Jonah he loves him, but it's after his ex visits? Jonah is a manipulator, definitely is driving responses to situations and trying to get some validation in their relationship, him acting like he's leaving when Brian's sister arrives? So many clues throughout the story so far. With five more chapters left, I think the ride is about to get interesting! Great job and thank you! -
Great chapter! Thank you!
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Great start! I'm looking forward to hearing the tale!
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Chapter 8: Giada gets a piece of Eric's sting.
mfa607 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: Giada gets a piece of Eric's sting.
Giada! Wow! Great chapter! damn auto-correct! 😂 -
Chapter 7: Eric returns home. Is he still the same boy?
mfa607 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: Eric returns home. Is he still the same boy?
Great chapter! More please! -
Chapter 6: What has changed after 5 years?
mfa607 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: What has changed after 5 years?
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Cindy is the type of parent....well, we know what kind of person she is. Luke is stressed and clearly Jackson is struggling. 😢 Thank you!
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Catching up from some missed posts but as it’s been said, one of my favorites here. Great chapter!
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What an great chapter! Dylan took charge for sure! Jake and Liam fighting....this will be good! Loved Dylan’s pic. Just as I pictured him. Great job.
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HOLY! Omg. Welcome back, we missed you! Great chapter!
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Excellent chapter! Thank you! Happy New Year!
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Great story! I’m a total sucker for a happy ending, especially at Christmas! Thank you!
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I think Peter owned up for his stupidity during their ‘Talk’, but Tristan has some serious thinking to do, he was hurt (rightfully so) but running away never solves any problem. Great chapter and I’m loving this story!
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Great chapter and great story! Tristan needs to pull his head out of his backside. Thank you!
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Something is clearly up....I agree with @Clancy59 The fact that Jake knows of Liam’s dad and his own father’s less than open book life may be a clue. Or, I’m reading a lot more into it than there is! 😂 Great chapter! Thank you!
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Great start...horrible parents..
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Yes, I have an opinion on that (maybe hoping I'm wrong), but Liam seems like he's past the idea of entitlement and thinks he deserves anything he wants. SO GOOD!! Thanks!
