brykerr
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The Kleenex has had a run for its money!! Not just from the emotional side, but also the humour! Nothing like English wit! A great story so far, and looking forward to the next chapters.
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Update - apologies. Xhosa is a nguni language. Zulus are the nation. Ndebele language is close to the Xhosa language
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Hi Quokka, I have read many of your stories and find them interesting. On reading this new story, there is an error, which I hope you do not take offense at. I was born and raised in Zimbabwe, and the main tribe (80%) are Shona, so that is considered the main language after English. The Ndebele are in the minority with 20%. I had friends who were Ndebele, and I love the language, so musical, but could never master it. Ndebele's are an offshoot of the Xhosa Zulu tribe from S. Africa, and settled in the south western region of what is now Zimbabwe. The two tribes do not get along.
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Hi Carlos, I've read all of the stories you have posted re CJ and Ozzie's adventures, plus Ritchie and the dads, and loved every sentence you've written. Thank you so much for entertaining me, and I'm sure countless others (judging by the comments). Please continue in the same vein, and I wait, with eager anticipation, for the next saga. Old and frail you may eventually be, but your CJ saga will live long in the memory. Thank you again
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Your penmanship is excellent. This has been difficult to follow, purely due to the raw emotions you have been able to generate, but follow it we do as it is so captivating. An excellent follow-on to the first part. Thanks for your dedication in writing this. I'm sure my sentiments are echoed by others when I say "bravo...please continue in the same rich vein!"
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Only You Can Set My Heart On Fire
brykerr commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Only You Can Set My Heart On Fire
James, this is an intense and thought-provoking work. The depth, and natural, way you express feelings in such a humanistic way says to me, rightly or wrongly, that you have a more intimate connection to this work, due to past experience, or self-analysis. if I am right and this is the catharsis needed to free you, then please continue. Well written, and impactual. Thank you so much for sharing this with the rest of us. -
I need to butt in here! 'Weinerdog', don't worry, I'm sure CL knows you were just kidding!! 😂
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Andre, I have lapped-up every chapter of this finely-woven tale, and eagerly anticipate Book 2 when it's ready. Thank you 😀
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Good grief, what a chapter!! When a story is woven as beautifully as this, I skip most of the sex scenes, as I am more interested in the story itself. That is, until I read this chapter! What a beautiful way to describe a four-way, their emotional journey, and subsequent release. Your command and use of the english language as you tell this tale, is wonderful, as well as the imagination you use whilst telling it. I have thoroughly enjoyed every line, paragraph, and chapter. Thank you for such a stirring story.
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I have been deeply touched by this, and the other stories that you have put out. Thank you for highlighting the plight of so many youngsters in terrible situations that are not of their own making, and the despicable humans who exploit them without, seemingly, any conscience. I have been chatting to a young guy who has been through the foster care system, and now as a young adult has to fend for himself in this unforgiving world. With your stories in the back of my mind, I have invited him to share xmas day with me, and to enjoy a hearty lunch. Thank you for giving me the courage to do this.
