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Michael, I think you are right on. I had the same feelings when I read the chapter. They both are interesting in the way that they decide when to be "gay" and when not to be. And yes, he is becoming more comfortable with James, but he is only 8 and jealousy can always rear it's ugly head again. I also think that Nick is close to coming out to his dad and he really likes Lori. I think that she is a wonderful woman and the way she deals with him is so touching. Jensen

Welcome lustful_orcs, I am some what new myself, not a writer though just a reader. I enjoy reading the stories here and have tried to give feedback as well. As a reader, it is weird because you don't want to offend the writer so sometimes you feel odd giving an opinion. But, I have been trying to do better with my feed back and make it constructive. Anyway, Formosa is one of the shared authors here and he has started a really good love story. You might enjoy "Loving You Loving Me" and he is looking for some feedback like you are probably more capable of doing than me. Welcome to GA and I look forward to seeing you around. Jensen

Hi CJames, I have done some research in that area as well. What I found when I went back to the older languages, siting mainly Sodom and Gomorrah, that the ancient words that were actually used to describe the city were describing behaviour. The same words used to describe a whore, woman, was the exact same words used to describe the men's behaviour. It was the actual behavior of the situation, that was admonished not being homosexual. Anyway, I took that further and found it to be consistent in almost every text that the word homosexual would apply. But, I never found that in any case that it was wrong when love was involved. Anyway, my 2 cents for you. Jensen

Michael, I think you are correct on many levels, but as Nick I too knew who I was at that age but I did not have the luxuery of having my boyfriend right next to me. I had a horrible life before coming out. Nick on the other hand has taken the bull by the horns and decided for himself what he wants and he will make sure that he gets it. Now, on the other side, he is very concerned about Taylor, he would never let anything happen to Taylor. He would protect him with his life. I think what we are seeing is a young man willing to say "this is who I am" and moving forward. Who are we to say what speed he moves at. He actually might need to move a light speed. That is a personal issue and I won't even touch that. Nick is very strong headed, very typical of a Greek, but it is also an admirable trait as well. He sticks to his guns. I can only imagine what he will grown into as an adult. He will be a force to be reconed with. I am glad that he is growing up in a world that will allow him to be who and what he is and that is simply a person. Time will tell, but I think this young man will lead us to a new tomorrow. Jensen

Hell yeah, why not. I love a good kiss! The person below me would love to know how Mathew McConehey looks playing drums naked. I would love to been one of the offiecers dispatched. lol Jensen

The person below me may get a raise tomorrow! Wow, I hope so! I deserve a raise! The person below me wishes that they did not have so many emails to answer in a day! Jensen

Wow, what an interesting chapter. Well, it does not surprise me that Andrew's parents took things so well. They have been supportive of him from the beginning. I think it is safe to say, that they have had conversations about this day many times. They are by no means ignorant of gay relationships. I think it took them by suprise and then they had to put things into persective. They want Andrew to be happy and if Jarred is making him happy, then they won't interfer. But, with that, I think Jarred is digging a huge whole for himself. One he does not realize he is digging. Andrew's parents can tell their son is in love or smitten but Jarred is not. Andrew's parents only want Andrew to be happy and to demonstrate that within the walls of their home he is safe and loved. What Jarred does not understand is to what length they are going to show their son how much they love him and at this point are trusting Jarred not to hurt their son. Jarred will hurt Andrew then he will a problem on his hands he can not control. Andrew's parents will do what ever they have to for Andrew and to make sure if he gets hurt no one will ever get hurt like that again. So Jarred is not just hurting Andrew now, he is hurting the family because he is being accepted into the family. If he hurts Andrew, I can see Andrew's parents and Jarred's parents having a pow wow and Jarred will have such a mess on his hands he won't be able to get out of it. He has created a second family now whether he knows it or not. Let's just see if Nick takes this even deeper still. I think he might build this up to as deep as it can get before Jarred dumps him then Jarred will feel the wrath of things he has never felt before. A whole family hurt by him. Jensen

Hi All, I am trying to get through this as well and I found this to be a great chapter and it seemed to me, that Nick learned a lesson in humility and in love as well. He sure loves his Papu! It must be hard for him to be so young yet have to share you dad and Papu. I am not so sure I would have done so well. But, I think he did a great job writing about it. I can't wait to read more of this story. Jensen

Hi All, I just got caught up on this story and wow, I was shocked at the ending. I was like something from Knot's Landing (Those who can remember that), or from CSI season finally. I must say that I am leaning with Talon Rider on this. But, I don't think it was Mark who is the issue, because Kevin knows who was in the room with his stepbrother and knows the identily of the person. Just my personal observation from reading this so quickly. I do have an idea that they at one point must have confronted Kevin's dad since they were at the center of all this and I bet he was not nice to them. So I think Kevin's dad is going to be very embarassed by this scene. If not something worse, like maybe a bad business deal. But, I have a feeling that Kevin will be involved in part of it. Great job Nick, can't wait for the next chapter. Jensen

"I'll give you what you want!" .... in bed Jensen

Wow C James, That is amazing, I can't even imgaine getting to 100!! Congratulations!! Jensen

The person below me woke up to frost everywhere and grumbled. Oh, how I wish it would frost! My darn allergies would go away! The person below me is looking for a new job!

Well, I voted interesting characters. I think that if an author can develope a range of interesting characters then I believe that a story plot will fall into place. Because as you develope the characters, they make the story. They develope it and they carry it. If you have one or two characters in a story, it is more complicated to make the story likeable. But, if you develope a line of characters that are interesting then it is more likely they will contribute to the story and the plot will thicken or develope. With out good characters, you loose the heart of the story what makes you want to come back what gives the story soul. Jensen

Wow, for a Newbie, I think it is great that the site has reached this much activity. Congradulations all, I hope that I can contribute in the future to help you get to 100,00 posts. Hugs, Jensen

I found it through Nifty. They really seem to help push this site. Jensen