Ivor Slipper
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It appears Matt's break has provided a way for his and Levi's relationship to be repaired.
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I strongly suspect there will be skinny dipping at Cockasix Creek. Also what happens between gay males is almost certain to be brought a lot closer to Levi under canvas than it has at Avalon.
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What sort of story do you think this is @weinerdog? We can't have Levi's parts being exposed😮
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@Summerabbacat Evidently no shields can save Brooke from your scorn.🙂
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That one though is on the levee...
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Cockatoo Creek is widening into Cockasix Creek.😃
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Chapter 5: Recomposition
Ivor Slipper commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Chapter 5: Recomposition
The end? It feels like it has hardly begun! -
Shane & Jimmy from the 'Mardi Gras Murders' I presume? A clever piece of interweaving.
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Chapter 3 - Layering
Ivor Slipper commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Layering
Not as long as you can get it in context, 😁 -
Chapter 3 - Layering
Ivor Slipper commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Layering
Hopefully Arun is amenable to green vegetables...🙂 -
Chapter 2 - Sightline
Ivor Slipper commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Sightline
Tomorrow, tomorrow - there's always tomorrow... -
Chapter 1: Figure-Ground
Ivor Slipper commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Chapter 1: Figure-Ground
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You make a very good point @weinerdog Despite losing his (supposedly?) much loved car Matt almost appears to be colluding with Levi to hide his involvement in how it came to be where it was found.
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‘Worst thing is, when the car got torched, I lost my log book. All the hours I’d already done. Up in smoke.’ I can only be astounded at Levi's definition of 'the worst thing'. It would seem the enormity of what he did hasn't sunk in yet
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Chapter 1: Figure-Ground
Ivor Slipper commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Chapter 1: Figure-Ground
No idea where this might be going, but I'm in for the ride. -
It will be interesting to see what form the 'redemption' takes as thus far Levi appears to have escaped very lightly. Telling Casey & gang that he wanted no more to do with them was easy as that was disposing of trash. Winning back the trust of others will be a lot harder
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Shouldn't the word 'usually' be inserted between Levi and operates?
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At last Levi seems to be coming to his senses. Casey has been ditched, along with his crowd. Now comes the time for confession, to apologise to all those he has hurt and to seek forgiveness. That no doubt will be hard for some.
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Or stop breathing!😃
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Marcus has been blooded - and bloodied. No longer the callow Roman youth with the cithara.
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I suspect that as a result of his church upbringing Levi may be looking at what he has done in biblical terms. Had he just taken the car for a drive without permission and put a dent or scratch in it, he would consider that a sin, admit his guilt and accept whatever scourging resulted. What occurred though was so much more and the sin thus much, much bigger. He is now scared of what the scourging might be - will he end up in juvenile detention, might his father even disown him? All that has been good in the last few months since his father came into his life is now in danger of falling apart, all because of his stupidity in not listening to the warnings he was given.
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Does Matt love his Commodore more than his son? He's certainly had much more of a relationship with it.
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Be honest @drsawzall, you were just hoping their relationship would undergo a meteoric rise...
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I'm a bit surprised details of the actual car crash aren't already circulating. I'd have expected Casey's mates not to hold back about 'Churchey' crashing his dad's car.
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So, the punch threw a punch 🙂
