Ivor Slipper
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Chapter 8. What Was Freely Given
Ivor Slipper commented on Mark Paren's story chapter in Chapter 8. What Was Freely Given
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Chapter 2 - Road Trip
Ivor Slipper commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Road Trip
Wonder how long that trip would have taken on horseback?- 32 comments
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Prologue - In the Beginning
Ivor Slipper commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Prologue - In the Beginning
I can see you'll be using your rope for skipping rather than lassoing @Summerabbacat🙂 -
So is your Titus a rescue?
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An ending full of hope with Titus turning from being a slave into being the provider of sanctuary.
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"Oh we just saw one another and decided to shake on it." 😁
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Phew! I thought at one point that Levi had repeated with Brooke the 'mistake' Matt had made with his mother, but seemingly not.😮 An ending worthy of an excellently enjoyable story.
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I hope @Summerabbacat & @weinerdog both have a good stock of tissues!
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Hopefully Titus will be able to enjoy the rest of his life as a free man.
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It occurred to me a lot earlier that Casey may well have been the object of familial abuse while growing up which could well explain his actions in this story.
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Don't start blaming your editor - someone might tell on you 😁
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So is Casey an arsonist and an arseonist?🤯
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Like this? Shark Vacuum Cleaners | Cordless, Upright & Robot Vacuums - SharkNinja UK
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Is that true @weinerdog, or just a tissue of lies?
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The gathering storm...
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I thought the story was set in fairly current time. I was just surprised that the checks carried out prior to the weekend were happy with the idea of Jamie sharing a bedroom with a slightly older boy.
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Have to say I'm rather surprised Jamie was allowed to spend the weekend at Avalon as it meant he would be sharing a bedroom with Levi.
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Elijah apparently needs to box clever. 🙂
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Act One: Out of Place
Ivor Slipper commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Act One: Out of Place
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I'm more than relatively certain that is what he means. 🙂
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Brilliantly described.
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Evidently Levi also has a crutch to lean on. 🙂
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Yes, but not to be confused with a whippersnapper!
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@Summerabbacat will definitely approve of the t-shirt. Very probably got a couple of his own. 🙂 Levi is starting to make sensible decisions of his own and maybe heading towards becoming a leader rather than a follower.
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It appears Matt's break has provided a way for his and Levi's relationship to be repaired.
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