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What is the deal with Monica? That last little interaction was very strange.
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@Krista I’m curious……how are you so in touch with the feelings, thoughts, and actions of gay teen boys? You’ve done a great job of building the characters to be so real and honest, which as a straight female is a huge kudo to you as a writer. Did you have gay friends in school that you draw from? Also, what do your straight husband and sons think of you writing gay fiction? I’ve always been curious about this. Hope you had an amazing Thanksgiving!!!
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I’ve always thought Colt and Davin had experimented together when younger. So Colt knowing Davin wouldn’t care about Joel was just a given. I think it genuinely slipped out, but only because Colt knew Davin wouldn’t care. Colt is definitely straight, but was also a horny teen willing to take advantage of any willing hand/mouth available. And we all know Davin was more than willing.
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First, THANK YOU for the early chapter. Truly made my week! Second, I loved this chapter. Maybe Joel is finally starting to relax a bit. He is cheating himself out of friendships and family by being so closed. Opening up a little, I hope he starts to find some happiness and joy. Happy Thanksgiving!!
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With many of us traveling next week, I think it would be a huge Thanksgiving prize if we were to get another chapter soon 😉. I mean, another chapter like on Monday or something would be such a great way to start Thanksgiving week. 🤷🏼♂️
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Well, I couldn’t be happier! About time those two finally started to relax around each other and let their feelings start to show. Ugh, now I’m already anxious for the next chapter lol.
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Not so patiently waiting for the new chapter to drop 👀 I bet I’ve checked this site 20 times already today hahaha. 🕰️🧐
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I don’t Haven actually understands what the word love means. He’s just a collector….he collects men as a way of making himself feel good. It’s a game, and all he cares about is manipulating people. Ugh, I hope he gets caught and is made to own up to his sick little games.
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Wonder if Jake will smell Clay in the apartment? I think that’s what Haven wants anyway. I think he would love for Jake to discover Clay in his bed.
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I’m totally behind the idea that you keep writing more of this story! LOL. I’m loving the story. I’d be happy to have many more chapters!
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How many more chapters are there? We’re just now one month into the story, so curious how many more chapters there are.
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As much as I want to like Joel, he’s just a butthead. I don’t think Davin and Joel will be anything more than friends, because Joel is too afraid to actually feel something. Davin deserves more than that. He’s spent too many years in love with someone who will never return it, so the last thing he needs is another false hope in a relationship.
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So happy you’re bringing this one alive again!!! Love this story! Hope all is well.
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Chapter 9: The dinner to remember!
Okiegrad commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 9: The dinner to remember!
Good points. Honestly, I don’t see Zane and River ending up together. I think they will be friends, but their relationship started on a lie, matured through deception and drama…..and I think ends in mutual understanding that they will never be good for each other. Zane can’t be trusted, and River can’t be tamed. They have nothing in common and nothing to build a life with. I think Zane needs to stay single for a while and grow up and repair his relationship with his family. I suspect there will be a beautiful, kind, trustworthy man in Rivers future….maybe even part of the family. -
Chapter 9: The dinner to remember!
Okiegrad commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 9: The dinner to remember!
Once again, my advice is Run! Run as fast and far from that bunch of whackadoodles!- 35 comments
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Chapter 8: The day after!
Okiegrad commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: The day after!
I much prefer short hair on men. I actually liked the pic lol. I just skip over the pats where Vanalas talks about his long hair or man bun 😂😂 -
Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
Okiegrad commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
River is so much more than Zayne will ever deserve, or appreciate. River needs to protect himself, and slip away quietly after having Zayne guarantee his financial payment. Then he will have the money, the confidence, and the freedom to find a man who is worthy of him. If ever there was a character written to portray me, it would be Zayne. I’m him. He’s me. And after all this time, all I have is this used, second-hand heart that is so broken it won’t ever be able to fully love someone again. River doesn’t deserve to be tied to someone like that who can only love him part way. He deserves it all. So, from someone who lives this story…..run River! Run to someone who doesn’t have holes in his heart that can’t ever be filled. -
I hope he can get out of his own way long enough to do it. He’s sabotaging himself in every area because of his fear and anxiety. His fear of being known as gay makes me wonder if he’s actually gay, or just a horny, curious teenager. He’s throwing happiness away with both hands right now.
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Come on Joel, loosen up your butthole and try to breathe every once in a while. He’s as nervous as a long-tailed cat in a room full of rocking chairs all the time. Relax man, be willing to give it a chance at least. And Davin seems to be sticking with him and staying interested….thats a good sign!
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Beautiful! Needed to hear that and be reminded of His love and grace. Thank You!!
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Chapter 6: A Heart Unspoken!
Okiegrad commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: A Heart Unspoken!
This story is going to give me an ulcer. I truly despise Harry, I want to slap Zayn, and I’m turning inside-out at River’s willingness to be so passive. Lord, I’m ready to explode!!! -
LOL true! I can’t keep from feeling that Joel and Davin will be great friends, supporting each other as they find ways to become who they want to be. But, I sense that’s all they will be. I don’t get a huge amount of sexual chemistry between them. It’s like they both have found someone who understands what it’s like to be scared of being different, and the temptation to experiment is there of course, but it’s a sense of freedom to explore more so than raw, sexual attraction. Maybe I’m wrong, but I don’t think Davin is ready to give up being in love with Colt, and I don’t think Joel finds Davin to be anything more than a convenient, and much needed friend.
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Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
Okiegrad commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
Honestly, I’m so pissed off right now, I’m ready to yank someone bald. if River doesn’t call a cab RIGHT NOW and walk away, he’s not nearly as strong as I think he is. No one can, would or should put up with that. That’s not only being slapped, but being made to pretend you enjoy it. Lord, I’m ready to explode.- 29 comments
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Lord, I don’t know if I could stand that. I would die happily trying though 😆
