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  1. wenmale64

    Chapter 52

    I am thinking Hunter may very well get command of Stalker. It is a cruiser, just a very big, bad and mean one....
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    Chapter 1

    Great chapter! The door is open for more possibilities than I can imaging so I will just read on and find out what our talented author has in store for the guys and Amy and us 🫠. I was a little saddened that Browbeat felt he needed to change his looks to be more accepted. It does tell a real life story of our society. However, I can see where the ability to transform would be useful in some circumstances. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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    Epilogue

    Killing off a main character for absolutely no good reason does not make a good plot nor a good story. However it does make a bad book.... like @Al Norris, I am gone!
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    Chapter 50

    Tough love is tight. I too have concerns about Anna. We will see.... I also think letting Faith back on the project this soon is a mistake. Being grounded for a week, for such a serious rule break, really seems like a light slap on the hand. That in its self sets a bad example for future issues.
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    Chapter 10 S3

    I am getting a bit worried about Clints infatuation with Mac. I can see things easily going sideways. Lonnies lack of concern also seems odd. I hope this is just my pessimistic side showing....
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    Chapter 48

    Wow. William and Sasha dating. Hm, can bad people really change? I am sure we will find out soon. Maybe Marc will have to shoot William with his favorite hand cannon.....
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    Chapter 40

    With this being out west, I am wondering if William may be pulling strings ....
  8. Loved this chapter. My on;y question tight now is: What bur got in Devins ass and what does it mean?
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    Chapter 5

    I have said for decades that "The perfect day starts, at the crack of noon, with a good lunch!".
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    Chapter 37

    Wonderful chapter. Somehow I just don't think hiding away from public life and governing responsibilities is going to go as smooth as they think. We will see....
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    Chapter 36

    As said above...heaven. This makes me wonder what excitement awaits our bonded pair......
  12. Another huge error is that the school has absolutely NO authority off school grounds, therefore only the last event is within their realm to pass out punishment. Where are the lawyers? They should be filing papers with the courts as I type!!!!!
  13. I could only react with angry because of the asshat math teacher. We had one of those when I was in high school and it took an action by the school board to "Advise him that his job depended on fairness". He was not there my senior year!!
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    Hotel Room 606

    Just the right mix of evil, gruesome and funny. Great writing and a great story!
  15. I am thinking the features do come from Tylers mom, but dad is a replacement. I am thinking that Matt may be his actual father or it could be the dead guy or ..... In any case leaving it in the mind of a curious 17 year old is not smart thinking.
  16. I just found your stories and wanted to say ow much I liked this one. I will be reading the rest in order. Well written and very real. The love between Steven and Aaron will win over the hate.... Well done!
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    Chapter 32

    It seems that now it is Adams turn to slow down and learn about Marc and his way of creating a BONDED future. Marc has grown up in a life where you live and die by your actions... his words. Adam does not really understand this...yet. Marc loves Adam and is trying to create a safe and stable future for both of them and their kids and grand kids and... for the next 150_ stanyears. Both of them need to open up and honestly communicate their desires, fears, doubts and hopes to each other or things will never be exactly right between them.....
  18. I too will chip in with thanks for the background information. When I first found your stories starting with "After We Danced", I was hooked on your stories. You write with obvious feeling and goals for your characters. Well Done!!! RIP Graham, Smooth travels...
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    Chapter 29

    I am not a believer in having an abundance of kids, but having a circle of friends and family each with a few "shared" kids makes for a lot of kids to love with a manageable number to raise, If we figure 4 per bonded group, we could easily have 20 without even figuring Sasha and the twins and other past loves..... Yea, 40 or so would keep everyone on their toes 😇!
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    Chapter 27

    As said above, please explain the birthing process. It is wonderful that Marc opened up to Adam and shared his pain and stresses and allowed Adam to have input on the things their future involves. I also think the families will need a private sit down to work out exactly where everyone lives on the list of both corporate and family expectations. Grandpa Alexander seems to also have a bit of "My Way" syndrome. It might do him some good to have a heart to heart with his sister, Grandma Armstrong, for a needed wake up call.....
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    Chapter 25

    Marc is doing much better, but he still has a bit of that "My Way" thing going on. Maybe after an honest heart to heart with Adam he might ease up a bit. Great writing @P. E. Knapp. I will wait drooling for the next chapter.
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    Chapter 24

    Very glad to see Marc is on the mend. He will always have moments where the trauma of this war will haunt him. I hope he will be open and honest with Adam and tell him WHY he had the meltdown he had. It will also be necessary for Marc to help Adam understand how to help him when things go sideways. I also agree with @Al Norris. There MUST be compromise on both Marc and Adams parts. If Marc continues with "My Way or the Highway" attitude toward the family and Adam in particular, the future of Alexander Knight House is doomed. I ave faith that things will move forward but I also expect a few bumps in the gates as it happens 😇.
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    "He Knows"

    I hope Nate ends up in prison and becomes the bitch for all the boys...
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    "Hug It Out"

    Well written with many possibilities. I just hope this was not really happening 😒. Just to abusively violent for any family member.....
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    Chapter 21

    Marc questioning if he should have talked with Adam after the slaughter at Evelyns rock is positive sign that he has a SMALL clue to interactions with people. He and Adam and the two families are from very different worlds. The only way for them to understand each other is heart felt communications. Marc has grown up in a very small contained world where expectations of him have been exaggerated and frankly cruel. NO 21ish year old should ever have the expectation, rank and power of a Rear Admiral. He could be an advisor, but NOT the deciding voice. After this "War" is in recess he needs to take time to reflect, talk with Adam and explain his upbringing and feelings with raw honesty. Then, Adam needs to whisk Marc and the house marines away to a private and solitary planet or rock and explain Adams upbringing and views on life. THEN and ONLY then, both of them should begin to plot out the beginnings of their life as bonded mates. While doing this some mining in the private reserve with an escort of friends from both sides to help show both of them how life can be fun and challenging both ways. Maybe a ride on an old earth style Roller Coaster could make Marc need to change HIS skivvies 🤢!
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