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This was an interesting and good read. I enjoyed it as it really did touch on ways that many gay stories avoid, dodge or simply skip over real life areas of relationships. I can actually see some families acting like Bens when family and money and especially control are involved. Good writing @W_L, keep it going!!!

I like this story and the things it says that are often never thought of in stories.

Outstanding story and a perfect sequel. It has been years, but I too hope C J is well and may come back to give us more stories.

I loved this story! I will admit being very outraged before the epilogue and actually ranted about it. I then started the epilogue and had to QUICKLY return to my rant and eat crow. If eaten head first, the feathers do not get stuck in your throat . This story is an amazing work of art. The talent and attention to detail is amazing. I am looking forward to reading more from C James!!!!!

I had a rant before I got to the epilogue. Now removed .

This was a wonderful story. Your talent to weave a tale is as good as it gets! I look forward to reading more of your works. Cheers to you!!!!!!

I hate to say it, but it is already far to late. Kyle should simply tell Amy what is going on and then run far away. Tell Doug to give Salvatore the deposit money and whatever the vig is and simply run. He has learned a lot and unless he is willing to do some really bad things he is forever damned. The only way this ever ends is with the terminal end to Sal and Tiny and maybe more.... Very bad people and most times even the police are helpless to REALLY help as they do everything through people like Matias and Kyle and they are the ones to pay the price. Run boy RUN!

I do not comment much, but this was the time to do so. I really love Aric traveling into his space. It gives the story a feeling of real life. Sam is... well, Sam. He is a delightful part of this story. I have already read your story Tommy Banks so I know a bit about the future. Depending on where this story goes and ends, I may suggest you put a Note on the Tommy Banks stories to Read This One First, less spoiler that way. Another thing I get from this story is how the eastern US and western US are VERY different. In much of the western US ANY acceptance of this relationship would not happen. At least in the rural areas I am from. Even now acceptance is very limited.... Great story and exceptionally well written. The vision your words paint are vivid and detailed. Very well done!!

OMG, drsawzall you are most likely a Prick!!! Note the capitol P and the smile it was said with!!

This is a fun little story that reads very well. It has a great feel and some excitement with lots of teen drama mixed in with the fun. This is a great story to read when you need a lift to your spirits. Give it a read and enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!

Way to go Grampa Crane!!!

With any luck Don will end up with a Jib up his a$$. I think it is time for Nicola and Mr. Lube to have a little accident with the contraceptives.... That would give Don something to fume over and it might teach Nicola a bit of humility...She needs a big dose!!! It would also give Rovvies son a cousin to play with 🤞.

Noah needs to talk to his grandfather first!!!

This one is rough. Both Seth and Noah have issues. Noah is being abused by patents that don't appreciate good kids and Seth js his own worst enemy while killing himself to be the parents he and Lil never had. I am really liking the story, while HATING the undertones and history.

Sympathy for Aiden is justified, but his actions toward Jason are not. Period. The picture is most likely a poor choice, but what about ordering a back issue of a gay mens magazine to be delivered by post? Unless there is something different about mail in the UK, I would think there is a better than average chance Mum is going to be the first one to see the pictures of Nathan in his (almost) birthday suit......

It is getting a bit to deep. Someone needs to either pull the drain or paddle harder...

@Myr, I noticed it at least 2 weeks ago bit figured it was a temp glitch. Sorry for not saying something as soon as I noticed it. Never mind I see it is fixed. Thanks Myr!!!

R.I.P. Betty and we will remember you with a smile as we see you in classic shows .

Great chapter Dodger! This was a fun chapter for a Happy New Year. The only way it could have better is if you had actually let US know what Nathans misdirected text said and left mention of the pastor out of the teaser . Happy New Year to All.

Read on for another wonderful Charlie Boone Christmas. The guys have a mystery to solve and with Christmas only a few days away Nicolaas and Max have no time to help or guide our young men on this adventure. Will our friends be home for Christmas or will they be in turmoil trying to set things right for the holiday. Jump in and begin a wonderful ride into the creative mind of our author, The Magical Geron Kees. Magic awaits .....

This is the 19th Charlie Boone story and it starts off with a new bit of skwish and some new powers in the group. However, this is just the prelude to a very wonderful Christmas spin on an old tale. We are quickly introduced to a bountiful thief at the holiday season. This unknown villain is a very powerful power user and his motives are a bit scary. If you do not believe me, ask Kip. Geron leads us on an adventure that is happy, scary, worry some, heartbreaking and joyous depending on the chapter and scene. This one will have you biting your nails until the very end when the presents are handed out and even Augie gets in a sniff or two just to welcome everyone to the party. Grab on to the sleigh rails and hold on for an intriguing ride into the past, present and maybe the future. Also never forget that with Charlie and Kip around, love is always in the air .

I is sad how people can be so selfish and uncaring of others feelings. Slap the bitch AND her cohorts.

Nope. You missed on this one Geron. The true businessman in me would just increase insurance coverage and reduce security. Why make it harder to profit?

I think it is time for Mr. Hoodlum to be buried in coal. If he were so altruistic he would be targeting the wealthy humans not just retailers with large stock warehouses. All this is causing is a big hit to the insurance companies that will pay out to replace the stolen stock and the consumers who will pay to cover the deductibles and increased premiums the companies pay. This plan has more holes than a good Swiss cheese.... I prefer cheddar .

I am liking the story, but it has me scratching my head a lot. There seems to be a very big question mark with Max not being more interested. There is something strange going on here. Is there a unknown donator to the Santa gift warehouse? On to the next chapter for answers......