BobSamson

Hi Owl, wanted to drop you a review for several reasons. I love everything about the story and the characters (David is my favorite:). Your story has inspired me to try to write again. I tried about a year ago but hadn't had alot of inspiration:) All of your story is interesting and intriguing, and coming from me, thats a compliment:) Cause even at my current age people say they think I'm scary smart:) Just voicing a bit here, your replies to reviews are quite repetitive. It may be me being paranoid, but I think it has something to do with your story not being updated in two years. Either that or I have no idea what I'm talking about and am making false accusations. Either way, it was fun Cheers from, Secret Identity

Cute, sweet and realistic in a way:) Definitely a good story:) Cheers from, Secret Identity

Lol! That was the greatest thing I've ever read in my 15 years of existence! lol! That was just hilarious! How did you manage to write something so funny!? It progressed and got more and more 'comical' lol! Cheers from, Secret identity

Can't say I cried like mr curiosus did, but I did, in fact, get quite emotional. This is a very serious story, with a very serious, very lifelike ending. From a professional standpoint, the story had enough plot to keep you interested until the happy came and the happy didn't involve sex. Just love. You should so sell this as a book, revised with more history of his life at the beginning. Just opinion, not criticism;) Overall loved it though!

I loved this story! So cute and innocent! Though I knew from the first encounter, he was the 6th;) Loved the story anyway! Again, so cute and innocent!

I loved this story sooooo much! It was cute and shy and a little bit of strife! All you could ask for in a short style! Hope you write for a long time! You are very admired Comsie! I also like some of your work on Nifty Archive:) Uhhh... "On the outside" I think;)