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  1. KD_stories

    Chapter 19

    In future chapters we really start to get a better picture of Tyler and what skeletons lie in his closet. He tries to be the best possible version of himself because he knows what a pitfall could do to those he is around. Don't worry we will get inside that head of his soon enough. Coach and Ryder have a ton of ground work to work on.
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    Chapter 19

    Hahaha they really would be a great couple who knows what's going to happen
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    Chapter 19

    I think the effects will be around for future chapters that's for sure.
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    Chapter 18

    We will lean a lot more about Tyler and alot of the skeletons he keeps hidden.
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    Chapter 18

    Im so sorry, and it's true some people can't understand no.
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    Chapter 18

    I agree I think it's desperately trying to find someone he can relate to or just build some sort of emotional connection.
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    Chapter 19

    I lay back panting, looking over at him, and feel the cold air hit my sweaty body. It sends a chill through me. “That was fun,” I say, putting my hand on his chest. He laughs. “Yeah… it was.” “We need to keep doing this,” I tell him. Callen leans up on one arm and looks at me. “Why, so you can keep kicking my ass in how fast you are?” “Dude, I am just trying to get you running faster !” I tell him. “Meh, I like slow
  8. KD_stories

    Chapter 18

    “You sure you don’t want to go with the rest of the team and celebrate?” my Dad asks, as he locks the field house. “No,” I say, moving the strap of my bag to my other shoulder. I don’t really want to have a heart to heart with him. It’s not that I dislike him I love him, I just don’t know if I will get my dad or the coach. He looks at me with a concerned look on his face, “Son, it’s going to be ok.” “Dad, it’s just been a long week,” I tell him sh
  9. KD_stories

    Chapter 17

    100% We will see!!!
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    Chapter 17

    Thank you so much! Yes Rusty has put alot of time into editing and helping me organize the story where it's not going to leave holes in it. I can say this much these new chapters I have never felt more confident in my writing that is for sure!
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    Chapter 17

    Trust me I am! These new chapters are good! I hope you will love them!
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    Chapter 17

    Trust me this is far from over!
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    Chapter 17

    Yes!!!
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    Chapter 17

    I think he just needs a friend and maybe he can find that. Yes Callen might need to go to the group as well
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    Chapter 17

    “So how are you and Callen progressing?” Dr. Decker asks. I fiddle around with some of the trinkets on her windowsill. “We’re ok.” “But?” “It’s stupid.” I I tell her as I plop myself on the little couch facing her “Well, it’s obviously not stupid if it has you so worked up about everything,” she says, leaning back in her chair. “We both just have so much on our plate that when we are together, it’s just awkward at
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    Chapter 16

    Nothing is ever simple for Ryder that is sure, if his past doesnt make it complicated he sadly does by over thinking things! thank you!!
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    Chapter 16

    Thank you!
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    Chapter 16

    Thank you! Callen is just as insecure if not more so than Ryder at times
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    Chapter 5

    Hey thank you! Yes Ryder has aggression that has been building and it will spill out in coming chapters and we get to really see inside hihs head!
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    Chapter 16

    Very true! I dont think we have seen the last of those two brothers at all!
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    Chapter 16

    It’s been over a week since I’ve seen Callen other than school but even then we didn’t get to talk, since every teacher I have seems bent on making me drown in homework. Garret showed up and gave us the news about Shawn and Dylan. Plus, he was pissed that Callen tried to pull a fast one on him. Garret told my dad that no one was at Callen’s house, and now I am grounded. Jeremy comes into my room. “Hey, you want to ride to the doctor’s with us?” “For what?” I a
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    Chapter 15

    Some people should not have friends, the sad thing is things like this do exist in the world....that is terrible about your friend..
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    Chapter 15

    Thank you! it's only going to get better!
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    Chapter 15

    “Hey Dad… since the other team forfeited, can I go to Callen’s tonight?” I know it’s a long shot, especially since my dad knows Callen and I are together. He takes his hat off and looks up at me from his desk. He lets out a sigh, “Does his father know that you two are together?” “Yeah, he is cool about it. He trusts Callen and told him to be responsible,” I tell him. I know this doesn’t exactly sit well with him. He leans back. “Ryder, you need t
  25. KD_stories

    Chapter 14

    thank you! Shawn really does complicate things for awhile
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