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It's getting better and better as it goes. I don't think Mark is going to get a lot of personal mining done in the future. I see him being the face of a huge enterprise.
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Really like this story!
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Old man! LOL!
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You are a day younger than I am. Your just a baby! LOL!!
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We are about the same age. I was born in Oct. 57
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Great chapter. I'm dizzy from all the jumping.
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@P. E. Knapp I am just old and senile. I told you a few weeks ago in one of your comments on Mark Arbours "Freshman Year" that I had never read any of your stories and was going to give you a try and I read "Tragedia Et Amor" then I read "Dances with Whales" yesterday and I have enjoyed both. When I went to find something else of yours to read I see you wrote "Love on the Rocks" I had already read the first 3 of the "Westward Confederation Series" I knew your name looked familiar but I thought it was from your comments on other stories. So I was already familiar with you. Great job. Keep up great work.
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I do hope you drop in on these guys in the future. Good story!
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Interesting chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
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I loved college partying! Another great chapter! I hope there isn't a major cliff hang after next weeks trip back to Tribeca and also to Fuego. That is the stalkers home court.
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I am glad Orion's leg wasn't shattered. Things could have been a lot worse for him. Quinn is stepping right up. Seems like a very smart guy. Looking forward for more.
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Another great chapter!
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Great Chapter! Looking forward to reading more later.
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Seems the Foundation is well on it way. I hope the guys have fun and safe trip on their cruise.
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6 blow jobs in a day would have been so much better and a lot less blisters after using my hands so much when I was a teen. I got and gave many multiple BJ back then too, but I can't remember ever getting 6 in 1 day. Love this story!
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I would think "top from the bottom" means the top is laying on his back and the bottom is sitting on it riding him. I have some friends like that position better than any other. I have always been a top and that was never my favorite position. I like the bottom bent double with his ankles over my shoulders. Great story @P. E. Knapp
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Last one I saw was in the 80's and was either at the Stephen F Austin Hotel in Austin, TX or The Gault House in Louisville, KY. I went up to the top of the Empire State Building 2 years ago next month and there wasn't an operator on it then.
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Will definitely. I might get arrested if I had to hang around JJ
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I dated a lady back in the late 80's that had 2 boys, a 12-year-old and a 15-year-old when we first started dating. She was 7 years older than I was. Her Ex-husband had just inherited over 20 million dollars when he turned 40. And his brother was going to get his 20 million when he turned 40 two years later. He really didn't take any time with the boys. He had by then married to one of his 24-year-old big boobed secretaries. He was having to pay my GF just over $5,000 a month in child support and alimony. That was a lot of money back then. But he was constantly keeping her in court about the support and alimony, costing her a lot in lawyer fee's. And she was having to pay the mortgage payments on their house that she got in the divorce, even though her dad had built and given them the house after they first married. Her dad was a big contractor. Her ex had taken a big mortgage out on their mortgage free home to expand his business. And the mortgage took almost half what she was getting from him. When some of his friends told him that his boys were becoming very attached to me he started trying to get back in their lives. Started buying them lots of things and trying to get them to want to spend more time with him and the oldest to move in with him when he turned 16. Before me he was always going to be out of town or tied up with business when they were begging him to pays them some attention. His young GF had gotten him doing a lot of cocaine at the time too. I only dated her for about 18 months. But she was just so jealous I couldn't handle it. So I had my company to transfer me out of state. But I really did miss the boys. When kids are involved I just can't see where they have to be used as pawns. Just be civil with the ex. It's the kids that end up loosing in the long run.
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@P. E. Knapp Since I just found you and started off with this story. Do I need to pause reading it and read another story or two of yours. To be able to follow along? Or is this a stand alone story by itself? I loves stories that lead into other stories, or series of stories as long as there is a story key to give me guidance. Either on this or any of your other ones. Please advise before I go any farther!
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With both Orion and Quinn both being under 18 I don't think Orion picking Quinn up at school it was caught on any kind of camera that he could be charged with kidnapping. Plus they didn't cross any state lines either. I can't think of any laws that may have been broken by either of them except maybe truancy. And with Quinn already being enrolled in Port Arthur and Orion having his homework there for him to catch up on, that would be far fetched. Which school would be be committing truancy at? Great chapter @P. E. Knapp
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But that would be a great collaboration though. But I am enjoying your work. You authors don't know how much you guys mean to a lot of us. It takes a lot of not only hard work, but talent too to bring your stories to us. So many get so attached to the story it almost becomes real as you must notice by some to the attitudes and sparring that are in comments. But thank you so much for what you do.
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Great chapter. @P. E. KnappI am glad you brought this story up in your comments in "Freshman Year" or I may not have found it, or at least for a long time. I normally look for stories with lots of chapters, or multiple books. So, I may not have ever gotten around to it. But thank you!
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Like two dogs sniffing each other, trying to decide if they should fight, be friends, or just go their own way. I hope and believe they will become friends more. I like how this well written story is slowly developing.
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Quinn got a little education and firsthand view of Orion's injuries. I think his attitude is going to greatly change not only of Orion, but others in general. He is now older and gotten to see what he realizes as true pain that someone has gone thru that he had made fun of in the past. The both seem to be impressed with the bodies of the other. Might there be more than just friendship in the future between the two of them? Looking forward to reading more of this story!
