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Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
pickuptoy commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
Thanks @Mark Arbour for this this newest chapter. Again great job. Could Jack be involved with Fellows and might he have been involved with Curtis Buck somehow in the past in some way. I know he is a very successful Dr. or surgeon and makes big money. But he is just a peon compared to Claire. Could he have doing some kind of positioning with Buck before his death? He doesn't like Will at all, so he has no emotional ties to Travis. -
If that is where you want to keep him that is fine too. If this was the real world I really don't think mentally he will survive. I don't see him surviving if Kris was to leave him. If I remember right, Kris has walked out for a short period a couple of times. He will put up with just so much. I don't see him as a gold digger, but he has gotten comfortable with the lifestyle. I may be wrong but don't see him putting up with a lot of JJ's mood swings.
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All part of him changing and getting better to live more of a normal person. I know being a part of a billionaire family you can not be a normal person. But being a productive part of society increasing the wealth or helping in the philanthropy of it. If he can show his talents in both decorating and fashion. He might can give Stef and idea of adding a spin off his magazine portfolio with JJ heading that line up. Something like Home Design Magazine or Luxe Interiors and Design, or maybe even HGTV style show for Stef's production empire. If he is just going to lay around the condo in the city waiting on a fashion event, shopping spree, or his next visit to his shrink might as well kill him off as a few have suggested or wanted. I had rather see him successful and productive, than a spoiled rich introvert. But a lot of very wealthy families have a few like that.
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Thanks @Mark Arbour for this latest chapter. Going to be interesting to see how the family handle Fellow's, the law firm and the Serbian's. Travis asking JJ to do his Manhattan Beach makeover may be the best thing that could ever happen to JJ getting his mental state truly in the right direction. If he does a outstanding job and we all know he will, his self worth will go way up. Maybe he will get some surf time in also and him and Will, and Brad can get a little closer. There may be some hope for him again.
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Hell, I am an old man, and I don't wear socks in mine either.
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Thanks for the chapter @Mark Arbour I bet Big is really a big ole closeted bottom. Likes getting it from homeless guys, and into raunch and sleaze sex. Probably into bestiality too. Killed Travis' dog because he could not get it to preform for him. Looking forward to hearing more.
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I have just finished reading the Bridgemont Series for the 3rd time uip thru about the end of HMS Valiant, and now 2nd time for Northern Exposure and thru this one for Peace of Amiens. Have held off asking any questions that I might have. What ever happened to the ships Rat dog Ranger. Was he killed in a battle, or left with one of Granger's ships he gave up. After he was introduced only was mentioned a couple of times. Also what happened to Matheus, bastard son of Count Axel von Fersen that Granger took on as his charge. Granger introduced him to his son Williams governor and told him to was to be Matheus's governor too. Then later when he was talking with Spence the boy's governor. When Granger introduced his kids to the King when they were visiting his how in Cowes he never mentioned Matheus then or since he had gotten home after introducing him to Mr. Spence. Just wondering what happened to Ranger and Matheus. Matheus seemed like a very fun loving and bright kid. Thanks @Mark Arbour reading this story multiple times makes it even better. Keep up the Great Work you do for us.
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This is my 3rd time reading the Bridgemont Series. I thought that Chartley was barred from every stepping foot in London or any part of England except the far norther part or Ireland by "The Brotherhood" specifically The Duke of Clarence Prince William.
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That is what flashed through my mind too. George's grandfather would help protect them. But his also is getting old. Chartley is only a couple of years older than George. So that might only be temporary because of how much longer his grandfather will be Govenor there.
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Some of John Nash's solo work. Marble Arch (29797251968) - Marble Arch - Wikipedia Brighton royal pavilion Qmin - Royal Pavilion - Wikipedia Buckingham Palace UK - Buckingham Palace - Wikipedia
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I was in Fort Pierce earlier today. Had to go see a client down there. Spending the night in Daytona Beach, heading Jacksonville, and Brunswick, GA tomorrow.
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Me too! I know everybody has their own sexual likes, fetishes, and fantasies. There are some that are a complete turn off to me, S & M, fisting, humiliation, and cross dressing and scat to name a few. I skip over and of those in vids and stories. But I do the same in stories that are mainly about sex scene after sex scene. Just are just so many ways details and positions that can be described until just gets old. Plenty of them I have started off reading and abandoned after a few chapters of the same old same old. Thats what porn video's are for. Thanks @Mark Arbour for 3 chapters in a week. I know you won't be able to keep up that pace, but thanks you for spoiling us every now and then. You are #1.
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I love it! I haven't heard that in years.
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I was totally surprised when I saw this new chapter. Thank you so much @Mark Arbour You truly are the best! So far there have no real big explosions as I thought there would be. I was surprised with Darius jumping out and trying to instigate it. And then Will jumping him on it. I would have thought that was JP's place to do that. But Darius looking directly at Will when he said it triggered Will to address it right off. Going to be interesting what comes up next. Could Marie and Amber, or Taylor and Amber get into a knock down hair pulling brawl as the dinner ends. Maybe Darius and Ryan might tangle. Looking forward until the next one. Thanks again Mark!
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Great chapter Mark. The big dinner just can't come quick enough. Looking forward to it.
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Cavendish was born in Jan 1780 so he will be 22 in a month 1802. Midshipman Fredrick Cavendish came aboard the HMS Intrepid on Feb. 1795. Book 3 Master & Commander Chapter 21. just said he was young. But in Bood 4 HMS Belvidera Chapter 10. There was a knock on the door, and Mr. Cavendish came walking in. Granger smiled at him. When he'd first joined Granger aboard Intrepid, Cavendish had been all thumbs, incredibly shy, and seemed completely out of his element. It was hard to believe that was only eight months ago. What a difference the time had made! Cavendish was due to celebrate his sixteenth birthday in January, and he'd gone from an awkward adolescent into a budding young man. His face had changed with his body, getting longer and sexier, but his eyes, those pale blue eyes, hadn't changed at all. They were inquisitive without being aggressive, very disarming in and of themselves. If his physical appearance had altered markedly, that was nothing compared to the way he comported himself now. Gone was the awkward young man who stumbled, replaced by an agile young midshipman who could run across a yard with no apparent fear. Gone was the shy young man, too timid to take charge. He was replaced by a confident officer who seemed to be a natural leader. About 2 weeks ago, I started reading the Bridgemont Series for my 3rd time. From Book 1 Gunroom up to now I am on Book 4 Belvidera and just read that in Chapter 10. I remembered someone asking how old Cavendish was on you last posting. This time I have been logging by book and chapter some of the main characters and ships as I go along for future references. Granger was 15 years old when he first started as a Midshipman in Oct 1791 so I assume he is 25. I haven't read anywhere exactly his month and date of birth.
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Thank for your response. I know you authors don't get a 10th of the credit that is due to you for all the enjoyment you bring to us your readers and fans. One story at a time I am sure is great, 3 at a time is a remarkable feat. Keep up the great work, You are appreciated!
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Thank you Mark for yet another great timely chapter. Looking forward to the next one and dinner at Escorial. Keep up the great work.
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That is great that you have another story in the series in the works. Yeah I had read all the way thru the end of "A Good Place" two times after you finished it on your site a number of years ago. And when I noticed you had started posting a "AGP" on this site, I re-read from "After We Danced" to your latest chapter you have released on "AGP". All are very good stories, and I have read all that you wrote that not in this series too. Thank you very much for the gift you have given all of your fans.
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Because of what Travis and been thru the last few days, I have a feeling that JP may put some muzzle on a couple of ladies before the Thanksgiving meal. They may do some glaring at Will, but JP will keep one on them whenever they get to obvious with it. JJ may even step in and help control them too. Surely Jack will not be there. Even if he has and invite, if I was him I would not show up. Thanks Mark for this and every chapter you give us. Keep up the Great work!
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Traver's getting sloppy seconds. That has always been fun!
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Very enterprising young man. Glad he is keeping himself clean from drugs. Looking forward to seeing where he heads with his last two years in college and then afterwards. He will probably end up with a rich sugar daddy that buys him a nice charter plane.
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I think this is going to be a very interesting story. Look forward to a good long book or series out of this.
