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Thanks @Mark Arbour for another terrific book. I look forward to the next one. Great Job.
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“I have a theory on how this will play out,” Cavendish said. They were interrupted when the food arrived, but as soon as the servants were gone, the conversation continued. “I will share it with you as long as you will bear me no malice if I am wrong.” “Of course not,” Granger said, to which Daventry nodded. “I think they are going to treat this much as your expedition to France,” he said. “They will appoint Charles to be the ambassador, then they will send George along with him to make introductions.” Cavendish was right on with his theory. I love how George handled St. Vincent. I don't think anyone else could have pulled it off with ease like he did. Thank you @Mark Arbour
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I agree that it is someone we know or friendly connection that has some pull high up in the government. Thanks @Mark Arbour another 2 story holiday gift day. You are the best.
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I believe it does have one, but Will said, "We could go into the dining room but Ken is setting up dinner. That will happen at 7:00,” I explained. “The other rooms are all being used as bedrooms, so this is probably the best place for us to meet.” The other rooms would have people’s things scattered around. Jake got seriously irritated when a gust almost blew some of his papers away. “We can go up to our room,” Travis offered. I gave him a dour look, because we’d just had sex and the bed was all messed up. Still, it was the biggest one available. “I’ll run up and get it set up.”
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Oh, I am also glad that Frank and Isidore were not invited on the trip. Maybe the bitch will see she isn't as important as she thinks she is.
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Great Chapter @Mark Arbour I just hope everything works out so the family is not in any danger from repercussions from any of it. And a plea-bargain can be done for Big.
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No! His blueblood Bostonian heritage will always be a problem with being with Will.
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For now I would say so. They are so young, I doubt it will last very long, but I do see they as friends for life whether or not either of them live a long one or not. I am a fan of them both. But do see them in a long term relationship.
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Thanks Mark for this latest update on my favorite story of them all. Looking forward to you next chapter. You are certainly appreciated.
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Another great chapter Mark. Wow what a web you spin. Can't wait for next chapter.
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Very good chapter. I was worried something might happen to Brad and Petrovic like what happened to the other Suburban. I agree with @Gary L and hope Joaquin Rubio will take out Fellows and all the others. I liked how Will stood by Preston when Finn was throwing his barbs at him. Thanks Mark you are the best!
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I love it! Thanks for posting @chris571
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I bet you make him abstinent from any sex at all until the war starts back!
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I hate George being stuck on land. I know it is almost a year and a half before war with France starts back again. Wish he might be sent out on a ship to bust up some pirates that have been nagging the trade routes between Britain and the US. Something to keep him from being bored and adding to his wealth at the same time. Maybe George can be helpful in getting the Rosetta Stone to England or at least helping escort it in. Anything to help the doldrums of peace for a Captain of the sea like Granger.
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@Mark Arbour Thank you for the latest chapters on both of your great stories. I'm glad that Will and Marie are together at the same place. They are good for each other. I would have liked to have heard the ass chewing that JP got from Stef over the JJ ordeal. I don't think he will be bon Brad band wagon again anytime soon. I bet Will will end up fucking Preston soon. Might be the first cock up Preston's ass, but I bet he has had other things up it in the past. He just hasn't had the chance so far. Looking forward to next chapter. How well will the dangerous meeting go? Could this be a setup?
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Great Chapter Mark. JJ is lucky that he has Will on his side and looking after him. And I truly believe Will and would gladly give JJ any portion of his trust that was originally intended for him to begin with. Darius will too. After Stef pointed out a few things, I think JJ will end up taking classes and at least getting and undergrad degree. Keep ut the great work @Mark Arbour
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@Andre Delport Thank you for the Great Chapter! Technology is great when it works right, but I loose all religion when it doesn't. The older I get the less patience I have. Keep up the Great work you do. You are appreciated.
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He threw rocks at it! LOL!!
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Great Chapter!! Will made the right calls with Ryan and the band, and also with Casey. Claire is going to be alright. Where is Luke isn't that his name that she has been dating? I have not seen where he has been mentioned since we heard about Jack, or even farther back than that. I eagerly waiting on the Celebration of Life for Jack. Is Patrica Hobart going to crash back through lift arm or gate if they have it replaced before then? Is Jack's father still alive? If so maybe he will call and get permission to attend. Thanks @Mark Arbour for all you do.
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Tonto was my favorite character in this series of books. Will is my second favorite. Brad my third, and Stef my fourth fav. Not all of us have a burr up our ass about Will. And by the way this story has been told so far, I think Will is the favorite of JP, Stef, and Brad. I believe they see his ability to lead the family dynasty in the future. We don't know how many more books of CAP there will be. But without Will I don't think the story would be near as interesting.
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Thanks @Mark Arbour for this chapter. Will did a very good thing in calling Casey. I think after all is said and done, each one of them in the meeting will feel a lot better going forward. I bet the baby boy is going to be spoiled rotten after he is born.
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I agree 100%.
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Thank you Mark for this latest chapter. Great job. Eager to see how Jessica and the baby blend in with the rest of the family.
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I have done that with "Bridgemont Series" 3 times for the first 7 stories and 2 times for the rest. On over in the winter when days are short and cold outside I intend to read this "CAP Series" again. I intend to do a list of all the guys that Will has had sex with.
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