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I am completely hooked on this story. Very well written and storyline. Keep up the great work @Mrsgnomie

I am really liking this story so far. Like a lot of others have commented, I have a feeling that Matt and Seamus are going to get very close. I expect Seamus to start showing up a lot more at this particular property he owns. He may not have gotten the scope on Matt and his situation from Denise after their first meeting. He probably thinks Matt is the straight father and not know of Matt's situation. But when he does get the scope, I bet we see a lot of him from then on. Look forward to reading the next chapter. Loving this story so far.

Now that JJ knows the upcoming visit I figure he will end up doing well with it. Kris on the other hand when he finds out he is going to meet Stef and Brad may be on pins and needles. l hope both of them put him at ease right off. He may end up being the best thing that ever happened to JJ. I don't think Gillis actually knew who Will was. He probably thought he was just another swim groupie that he thought he could just push around. But had no idea he was part of the rich and famous family. He probably didn't even know Will's last name. Great chapter Mark. Looking forward to the next one!

I just read the next chapter, so most all of my questions above were answered. I guess I just wasn't patient enough.

This is my first story of @Mrsgnomie that I have ever read. It has pulled me in to see how it unfolds. Enjoying it so far. I am wondering how he is getting by financially. Is Dayna's family funding him 100%? From what it sounds like his family isn't helping him. And sounds like they had not mailed out the signed life insurance policy that was going to be paid for by her employer. Or does it matter if it had been signed or not? But If I remember right it wasn't that big of a policy. Now about 3+ years after Dayna's death that should be gone. Or does he have some kind of income coming in where he works from home all the time? Just wondering who is financing the family.

You didn't know when you posted this, that just a hair over 3 months and Mathew Perry would be dead. We never know, never promised tomorrow.

Happy Late Birthday!! I hope you had a Great One!

Great Chapter Mark! Looking forward to the next one! LOL!!!

Thank you Mark for this latest chapter. And while I was reading it another notice came in that you have updated "Freshman" you are a making me a happy man! Keep up the great work!

Looking back and reading some of the responses, both mine and everyone else's 6 or 8 weeks later are funny. But my hate for JJ has changed over the last number of chapters. I am now pulling for him to become a more likeable, and productive young man with a clear direction in life. Since he is now in a relationship that I hope turns out to be very positive and lasting for both him and Kris. Travis and Kris could be great additions to the family in both harmony, wealth, and power. But if he keeps acting the same as he has always acted, hopefully it will be a double decker bus that runs him over!

Thank you Mark for another great chapter!. Love it you are pushing them out regularly. “I have wanted to meet you for damn near my whole life,” Ian said to Stef. “I’ve read at least three of your biographies.” “That is kind of you to say, but I am not the hero of the hour, you are,” Stef replied with a smile. I interrupted their mutual admiration moment by introducing Grant. I liked that response to Ian by Stef. Shows a lot of class from one of the world's richest men. The stop off in NY is going to be a fun!! And I think will be a good move in building a better relationship and trust between JJ and the rest of the family. Maybe that will help JJ's direction of how his life should head. Should he further his higher education or be and apprentice at Stef's magazine, or both. Just mulling around shopping, partying, and sleeping till about noon has no real purpose. Kris has a career and JJ now needs one too. Maybe Kris being seen around Stef and Brad will enhance his status with both Goldman Sachs and his clients too. Who you are associated with can establish credibility. If Kris is good at investment banking he deserves the boost.

It really is an honor for Granger to host Lord St. Vincent for the journey over to Weymouth to meet with the King. Would be interesting if they were to encounter a French ship lingering some distance off shore along the way after they have cleared the Isle of Wright. Glad Grangers kids like Calvert and him seemingly to like them too. He may become Uncle Francis to them. LOL! Thanks again Mark.

Great chapter! Seems like for JJ life is good! And Will seemed down without the love of his life back in CA, but then Ian Thorpe may make life good again for him. Will can be Will again. By the way right after I started reading this chapter I got a notice that you Mark had already updated the Granger Series. @Mark Arbouryou have been a busy boy. Thanks for all you do!

I just checked his profile and he was last on GA January 25th. And last comment on Chapter 104 Jan. 10th

I was wondering the same thing a chapter or two ago! He always would chime right in.

Thank you Mark for this latest chapter. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thank you Andre for the latest Great chapter. Keep up the Great Work!

I don't hate JJ. I have never cared for him though. But I do think they him and Kris can be good for each other. Kris can keep him fucked real good and hopefully man up some. Susannah, and even Bellona keep him pussified and whiny and acting like a little boy. I like how he was assertive with Rafael. And Kris being with Jj is really going to help him open more doors and move up in his career. I really don't think he is trying to be a gold digger, just riding a horse is a lot better than hopping on a mule here and there. The two of them might flourish together and stick with one another for some time. J.P. Stef, and Brad may even be impressed with the two of them. Will might even come around JJ a lot more. Otherwise JJ may just be JJ, not do anything constructive the rest of his life. Just be a fashion world groupie with no direction.

@masongpretty much summed up my feelings about this chapter. I have never been a fan of JJ's. But I can see hope for the kid. Kris may be good for him, and he may be good for Kris. I really don't think Kris is a gold-digger, but more of an opportunist but may even be a keeper, or at least someone to help JJ get in a better direction. Maybe as this relationship builds JJ may become a better person with a drive to become relevant. Not just a little whiney bitch! Great Chapter Mark. I was disappointed when I saw JJ was narrating, but you did a hell of a job with it. Keep up the great work.

Wow! Perfect timing for both Granger and Calvert. I wonder it that was the King's first voyage the he encountered the enemy. He will have something to boost about when he gets back to court and to laud George with. Thanks Mark. Another Great Chapter!!

Thank you so much Mark for getting Granger back on the water again. I wish he could keep permanent command of the Endymion. But just having him in command again even if temporary is welcome. Keep up the great work Mark!

JJ is just JJ, my least favorite character on here. I have a higher respect for Zach and "The Black Widow" than I do for JJ. Whenever he is the narrator, I picture the weather as being cold, and foggy outside every time, whether it is day or night. Thanks Mark for the chapter.

Now where did I vaguely hint that George could die? If you will reread the post, I responded to Mark's quote.

I am really hoping that doesn't happen or at least until George has lived a long fulfilling life.