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Thanks, Defiance19. It is a troubled road for them, but they do have some moments of reprieve together. On a physical level, they do good together. On an emotional level... well, that's a little more tough to define. We'll have to see how it goes... Thanks for your comments and for following along. I really appreciate it.
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I hope you do, my friend. Cheers - Mac
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"Newsertainment" - I like that term. It's apropos to this (unfortunately...) In today's entertainment world, "coming out" isn't nearly as taboo as it was 10 years ago (yet still is.) For Ben, it's a huge deal. And something he's hesitant about, with good reason. The world's watching. And the media is ruthless. But for this moment in time, he's able to put some of that behind him. Maybe only briefly. I appreciate your comments, as always, droughtquake. - Mac
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You're very kind, Val! Your comment about the anatomy lesson made me chuckle. :-) Glad you liked the motel scene as is. As we know, sometimes less is more. I wanted to portray the dynamic between them and also Ben's physical and psychological reaction to (finally) releasing some of his repression. Cheers - Mac
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Thanks, Larry! I won't apologize for you needing to pause for a break. ;-) Glad this chapter sparked some interest. There are some nice moments of connection for Ben and Travis but a lot of bullshit in between. Because, you know, life's imperfect, and so are people. But that doesn't necessarily mean they're doomed.
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Hope your birthday was a fantastic day for you, tim! Cheers, Mac
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Room #210, located up a flight of stairs, was at the end of a narrow breezeway that overlooked the mountainside adjacent to the motel. Had there been daylight, Ben might have paused to admire the view. But as the sun was down, and the night air freezing, he quickly entered the room behind Travis and shut the door. They kicked off their unlaced boots, dumped their crumpled clothing into a pile on the floor, and slid out of their snowboarding coats, which had been momentarily donned as they’d left
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Chapter 38 Merry Christmas, My Love
MacGreg commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 38 Merry Christmas, My Love
"But only one thing can soothe his hurts. Love undying through a sad life's haze." That hits me to the core. This poem evokes sadness and joy and all kinds of emotion. I get it. Vety much so. Merry Christmas to you. -
Thanks, Larry. I'm glad you keep coming back! If it keeps you interested, then I'm accomplishing something that I want to accomplish. Let the dance continue. Thanks for your feedback.
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I promise to only apologize for the short ones. ;-)
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Longererer chapters are fine for me, too, but will that throw off the pattern of sections I've got going so far...? First-world problems, lol... Cheers, tim. And congrats again on your anniversary.
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Yep, there may be some things waiting back at the ranch. Ben's time there isn't over just yet, and Auda and Bryan are still there, too, of course, doing a whole lot of talking amongst themselves because they've got little else going on... Thanks for your comments, Jeff.
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I know what you mean; it's been in the single digits here, so I want to dip into the hot springs, too. I'm ready. Good to know (from everyone) that the long chapters are preferred. I've been purposely dividing each chapter into two sections to avoid lengthy postings. :-)
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The return down the mountain began in silence - Katy brooding in the back seat, Ben brooding in the front. When Ben had first returned to the Dodge after the altercation in the trees, Katy hadn't been around. He'd figured she was off sulking somewhere, licking her wounds and nursing her fragile ego, and he'd been thankful for her absence. Ben had found Travis seated in the open doorway of the driver's side cab, smoking one of his Camels, quietly listening to Johnny Cash on the stereo. Although h
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Potting wheel--keyboard. Yes, indeed. I'm right there with you on that one, Gary. Hence, I write. :-) Everything does feel a bit messy in this story, but it won't always be that way... possibly... maybe. Thanks for taking a moment to share your thoughts on it. You're right that Ben's shaving was symbolic. Not only to make a fresh start, but to peel another layer off.
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OK, well, that just made me more sad than I was with the last chapter... I was secretly hoping that Jae and Dave would be reunited, that they'd have a lot of working out to do, but that it would be manageable and they could return home together. Your description of Dave's journey on Mersey, and the bond that formed between them, was very touching. The scene in the barn, where Dave discovered the bodies of the young men and took the time to give them a proper burial, was also very touching. Inherently, Dave is a good man. He just made a mistake. Now, he has to live with it. Losing someone you love without having made amends is not an easy thing to live with. Great job on this chapter and on this story overall.
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It's true what they say: you can't take back words once they've been spoken. That's why it's so important to THINK before you SPEAK, especially in those tender, heated moments, and especially through anger. But... we all do it anyway. Dave did it, and now he's fucked up his relationship with Jae, which makes me sad. You expressed so much emotion in this chapter, tim. I felt Dave's regret and sadness in my core. Is it too late? What will Dave discover along his journey? I'm hoping for a happy ending, but I know that life's messy.
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The horribleness of Carly reminds me a bit of Katy's character in 'Dissonance', only Carly's old enough to know better. A very conniving individual, right from the beginning - and to be that way to her own twin brother seems extra brutal. Whether spurred on by jealousy or insecurity or a power trip, her intention of trapping Jared into marriage meant bringing an innocent child into the mix. Now, she's using that child as a weapon. I hope that Craig and Jared can work together to make things right, and that Jared's pride isn't hampered in the process. Your writing style is A+. Your dialogue between characters feels so natural and real, it's like I am listening in on their conversations.
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Ben's wondering many of the same things, Lisa. Many questions, many uncertainties. One might say that he needs to snap out of his head and deal with it - but that's easier said than done when you're in the thick of it. Thanks for your enthusiasm on all of this. I'm glad to have you along.
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Hey Defiance, thanks for your kind words. I think most people assumed that Katy's good behavior was too good to be true. Pretty obvious, eh? But surprises happen in this story, still to be revealed. Hope you'll stay tuned. Cheers - Mac
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Ah yes, the true story behind the scar... most likely NOT from a horse shoe accident. You are perceptive, Lisa. :-)
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I'll get you through it, dughlas. Promise. :-)
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Ha, I love that you've compared reading this story to sipping a fine whiskey. I can appreciate that! Thanks for the kind words, and I hope you'll continue to follow along on the journey.
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Thanks, Parker, I wanted to keep the characters real and the story believable. I'm glad you see it that way. Thanks for reading and commenting. Cheers - Mac
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"Katy has a big shovel"... YES. SHE. DOES. Thanks for pointing that out, tim. Cheers
