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Although I figured the "out" was coming, it still took me by surprise. I guess I wasn't expecting the hammer to hit so soon. At least Ben seems to be handling it well so far, but maybe he's experiencing shock right now and it will hit him harder later. I'm worried how things will be when he's off the ranch and away from Travis... Will his feelings be strong enough to carry him through the pressures of the spotlight? It won't be easy for him no matter what. Travis might need to be HIS pillar of strength now. So many questions and "what ifs" still out there. Cliffhangers! Anxiously awaiting the next chapter, Mac!
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I'm really hoping he takes a chance on an HEA with this one. I'll be happy with the story either way but I'd really like to see Ben and Travis work out against the odds. The wait is hard but I know it'll be worth it because it'll be another great chapter ahead. Although I have no idea what's coming next, which is also hard! It'll be interesting to see what Ben's decision/reaction is once he's off the ranch and away from Travis. I'm hoping for continued honesty but the pressures he'll face in the spotlight will no doubt be challenging. Keeping my fingers crossed!
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It seems like big winds of change are coming but also Ben and Travis are closer, so I'm hoping they can weather through it. There are cliffhangers though, which makes me anxious for the next chapter. https://www.gayauthors.org/story/macgreg/dissonance/22
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Really great story. In the end Franco got exactly what he deserved in a way that would punish him the most. Very good scheming on the lead character's part, and very well written on the author's part.
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Tender, sweet and unexpected. What begins as a heart wrenching bully story turns into a story of hope, love and friendship. The Valentine card was the perfect transition for us to find out more about Peter. Really well done!
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Cruel joke, but I've seen some ugly April Fools stunts out there in the world and this one was at least short-lived. I loved the set-up of the story and getting to know a little about the main character before the events started happening. For being such a short story I felt invested in Andy's plight from the beginning, so that makes a great story, IMO. And I figure that Jayce and the pretend-Jayce knew each other previously, so maybe there's a friendship there for Andy with her (if he can overcome his exasperation about the whole thing). Great job on this.
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I bet Ben's head WON'T cooperate with his heart because even though he's supportive right now, that's a lot of stuff to deal with and he's assuming that Travis is done with doing *things* for $$ - but does Travis agree with that? It would interfere with his financial plan. And once Ben's back in Hollywood doing his celebrity spotlight thing I can't imagine he'll be *out* any time soon. The story's title is not hopeful, as you pointed out Defiance. But also like you said- however it plays out I'm sure Mac will get us there in style. REgardless of how it ends, it's a good story.
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I can see how a warning label could be beneficial to some readers, especially those not expecting something so vivid. But that dream was intense (well, all of it was!) I guess maybe Ben's mind is trying to sort out the sex work and the assault all at once? Or his own insecurities or something? Well I hope his mind resolves it soon because I'm pretty sure his heart's already deep in this.
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New chapter was posted yesterday: https://www.gayauthors.org/story/macgreg/dissonance/21 Intense chapter. Lots of deep dialogue and honesty. And a crazy dream sequence!
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What everyone else said-- intense chapter! You dropped all of the emotions right down center into this one. There was a lot that needed to be said and you made the dialogue happen in a natural and powerful way. Honesty has opened up for them and now everyone (Katy included??) can start to heal hopefully. That dream sequence, wow! Am I the only one who was thrown off by that? It wasn't about a homeless person but Ben's mind playing tricks on him. The black birds coming out of the guys mouth?? and that bathroom stall scene... sheesh. Someone needs to dream analyze. Excellent chapter, Mac!
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I'm betting on Eric being a future problem, to what extent I don't know but I'm anxious to see what's next. I think we're going to understand Katy more as we go on, maybe... or maybe the Cooper clan is just messed up pure and simple and we won't get the explanations we seek. My interest is more in Ben and Travis and their relationship evolution. I'm rooting for them to come through.
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The pleasure is all mine, Mac!
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I agree, very powerful. So much said in so little space while at the same time leaving us wanting more! Bring it on! (But like droughtquake said, priority to Dissonance!)
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I know what you mean, Timothy. The mom seems aloof or maybe it's that she's in denial, I'm not sure. It's definitely worth a read, Reader.
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Thanks for the tip, Valkyrie!
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Oh wow, I didn't know there was a "spoiler" option to this thing! How does that work? And I agree about the naturalness of Mac's writing. It drew me in too, like weaving of a web of plot and characters. I don't have to like all of the people and events involved to love the story. BUt it wouldn't be the story it is without all of those things.
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Ha ha you're right about that Timothy. The sisters kind of act as negative forces working against Ben and Travis. But Curtis isn't much better, either, lol. At least Audra seems to be coming around a bit now. Not all family members get a long in this world and that's clearly portrayed in this story. All a part of the "dissonance" that underlies everything, which I like because it adds ripple upon ripple to the plot.
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I think this story deserves a spotlight to be discussed so I'm going to try to start it here. It's been great read so far with lots of twists and turns regarding relationships, coming out, shame, dealing with past painful experiences, etc with some sweet spots and intimate moments thrown in. I really love following the lead characters through their journey towards each other, and Mac has a way of making the setting and events feel real. Check it out if you haven't. https://www.gayauthors.org/story/macgreg/dissonance
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I really enjoyed the imagery of the calf being born and the open meadow and sunset. I could just imagine Ben's reaction to seeing all of that for the first time. It's the sort of situation that pulls him and Travis a step closer because of shared experiences- he gets to view life through Travis' eyes a little more with each passing day. I hope that Travis gets that same chance with Ben's life. Uncle Ed's character makes me sick mostly because I've had similar relatives/people in my life. Toxic and better to stay away from whenever possible. And the mysterious return of Eric at the end?? Where the heck did he come from? What will Travis do? How am I supposed to wait for the next chapter now?
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Vernal touches and savory whispers... love it. I almost get a sense of the spiritual in this poem, like a lost love who's now a spirit maybe? Definitely a theme of longing. Great poem.
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Like others have said, I'm not sure what the future holds for these guys, but I'll remain hopeful that it won't be all sad and "dissonant". To me, there's hope in the fact that Ben is accepting of Travis, and Travis is feeling more tender and loving towards him. Despite the usual tension that seems to circle them, you introduced some sweet moments (and smokin' HOTNESS!) to this chapter. Damn you write a sex scene good.
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Very interesting short story, Mac. You have a gift for the erotic - whew! I now have a few images to go to bed to tonight. The fact that you don't spell everything out (show don't tell, as Val said) makes it that much more interesting, because we as the readers get to use our imaginations to fill in the blanks. And fill in we shall (or at least I shall, lol). Thanks for gifting us with another piece of your writing.
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Great chapter here, Mac! I'm going to guess that Jack definitely recognized Ben for who he is and that's why he acted so stunned about seeing him show up to shake his hand. Talk about throwing the guy for a loop! He probably thought he was seeing things. I agree with Val, Ben was brave to do it. I guess he didn't want to see the struggle escalate. I also like that Audra kind of stood up for Ben in the beginning, even though her deeper intentions still seem questionable to me. Anyway, great read as always. Larry
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Aw Mac, you even made me tear up a little with this chapter. I've been rooting for these two since the beginning. Travis showing a "softer" side was very touching, but I know he's got a long way to go still. I almost wondered if maybe he was emotional because of just having been with Jack beforehand and all the stress surrounding his personal anxieties. Hope Ben keeps his softer side going too. I can't wait for the next chapter, wish it was coming out now! Lol. Thanks for the awesome writing, as always.
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And so the dance continues... I agree with what Parker said, the title Dissonance fits well for this story, there's so much conflict everywhere you turn it can be maddening at times. You're very good at moving the story along at a steady pace with very little down time for us to catch our breath. We never know what's around the corner. I like that Travis is trying to let down his walls and Ben is somewhat receptive to it, but it still feels a bit hopeless I'm afraid. And Audra and Bryan offer up a whole other level of conflict in all of this. Another great read, Mac. Thanks!
