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Well. That was... eventful.
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Kotik's Birthday. Part 3
Yeoldebard commented on Demented's story chapter in Kotik's Birthday. Part 3
So, I came back for a quick question here. As a Vicar of both Emotion and Wood, does that mean Kotik is popping angry wood? -
But he is one of my favourite characters. I live him as a character and am absolutely appalled by him as a person.
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Duke Baldric talking with the Sibel government: Hi, yeah, uh, you know how you wanted to collar my son, because you thought he was too powerful. And I fought you tooth and nail to keep him unchained? Yeah... well, you were actually right all along, so... oops...
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This is absolutely brilliant. I love how you've taken so much from the real world and twisted it into your own unique character. Just amazing.
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Kotik's Birthday. Part 3
Yeoldebard commented on Demented's story chapter in Kotik's Birthday. Part 3
I do have to say, I feel Demented's story is much more nitty gritty with the magical theory and I love it. Very inspiring. -
Kotik's Birthday. Part 2
Yeoldebard commented on Demented's story chapter in Kotik's Birthday. Part 2
Oh Kotik, you damned Gary Sue I love you so much... (This is not meant to reflect poorly on the character or writer at all. Gary Sues are so much fun to play with. I have one of my own 😛 ) -
DUN DUN DUUUUNNN
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Kotik's Birthday. Part 1
Yeoldebard commented on Demented's story chapter in Kotik's Birthday. Part 1
Baldric ain't your problem Old Man. Time to see an Avatar in action maybe? Though that probably goes beyond his abilities in the mortal plane. -
Dude! THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING!!!
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Circles within circles. I love how flawlessly planned this all looks. I can't wait until Kotik gets to start playing with some wood... other than Baldric's wood, of course...
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Well, that is one way to debase one of the notion sex workers are to be looked down upon ❤️
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Interlude: The Faceless Wight
Yeoldebard commented on Demented's story chapter in Interlude: The Faceless Wight
Damn, he is goood! -
Well that was illuminating. I'll be heading off to horny jail now...
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When the whole antagonist protagonist "we arent that different" trope is agreed upon by both parties. I love it!
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Lord Baldric had me a captive audience. I can only imagine how Kotik must have felt being in the middle of all this. By the way, breaking in a virgin while the estate listens... not the way I would have liked to be broken, but damn if that didnt make the kitty blush...
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Armes Katze. The little kitty is in need of love, and I do believe he has found it and so much more.
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I love working with hard magic systems. I tried to include a more soft system in one of my series, and honestly, I try to avoid the magic that I created because it feels too... vague.
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Sometimes you just need to cut your losses and run. Or, you know, blow up in an agonizing ball of steaming ice.
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You actually hit the nail right on the head. Why would a being need multiple pairs of ears? What purpose would the extra pair serve, other than making it obvious that the character is not human. But looking at it that way actually makes a lot of sense.
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Magical theory has always fascinated me, and the idea of enhancing the body's natural abilities to ease learning while still speeding it along is a great use of magic. I can't wait to see what else these collars can do
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I have to say, it took me a bit to pick this up (mainly because I absolutely abhor four eared nekos) but this is a great story so far. Can't wait to read on!
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Blood poured from Jakun's hands, Anya's blood, Aofe's blood, Jeremy's blood, all mixing together in a lake that threatened to consume the catfolk. "No… please…" The whimper drew him toward a window that appeared in a thick black fog… a dream? Or a vision? Either way, Jakun moved, silently floating above a ground he couldn't see. He saw a catfolk standing over a corpse, arcane words pouring from his lips. The body rose, a groan of air escaping its lips as it straightened. Jakun gasped
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Galen- Building Boundaries
Yeoldebard commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in Galen- Building Boundaries
So would I to be honest. Guess that's another project incoming. -
Galen stared at the knife in Reinard's hand, the Faro twirling it on a finger. The tiger was nervous; the water around them was choppy, and he knew that knife was razor sharp. "Do you really think you should be playing with a knife after-" Reinard scowled, gripping the hilt of the blade tightly. "Okay, okay, fine. But if I get stabbed by a flying dagger, I'm blaming you," Galen said, holding up his hands in a gesture of peace. He was going to have a talk with Themis, as soon as t
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