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Henry and Gavin, hmm.
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Oh dear Manda, how manly is that?
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Cool Justy is back just in time.😁
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I agree with everything that you have said in your review of these stories, that they are truly inspiring and I also feel that I am missing out on what happens next in all of their lives.
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Is the comment correct about Xander being a spoilt rich kid? I also agree that he has to grow a pair and stick up for himself when a problem arises instead of running off to see the school administration or to his cousin to sort out his battles as he is acting like an immature person.
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An interesting story, although I am a bit confused as Xander was 10 when Huon died but in the story of New Life on the Swan Xander was 8 years old?
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Is there a romance on the cards between Xander & Chas? A great chapter.
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Xander is acting like a spoilt brat, but the way this reads it seems that the housekeeper went a bit overboard in dropping off all of Xander’s belongings to the school, I would not have thought that she had the authority to do that? Why didn’t anyone visit the apartment before buying it if they or Xander was going to live in it? I find that odd behaviour. This makes me wonder if they have more money than sense?
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Great chapter, looking forward to more adventures soon
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The boys are teenagers but I think that Julia was a bit harsh wanting them all back, maybe Edgar could have stayed to keep an eye on Devon
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Hmm I wonder if Edgar has a crush on Devon? Great chapter
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Getting a drivers License in England is certainly different from Scotland as all I had to do when I swapped my Aussie license for a UK license was to fill out a form hand over a passport photo at the post office and it was sent off to DVLA in Swansea, Wales. That was 16 years ago so I guess that things may have changed a bit.
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A great chapter but has Devon thought about how he will manage to get British Citizenship?
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I think some of Rob’s internalised homophobia has been brought on by his stepfather’s homophobia.
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I echo Chris’s comments this series of stories of CJ, Owen, the Squad, the Elite crew are excellent, I am another reader that will miss their adventures, I have come to think of the guys as family living in America. Thanks Papi x
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This story was way too short, I am sorry to see this series of CJ and co finishing up I have followed it avidly, I will miss these guys and their adventures. my one criticism of this chapter why did you call CJ and Owens kids Jefferson & Roosevelt? Why do Yanks give their kids Surnames as. First names? It’s just odd. Muchax Gracias Carlos 😘
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Great chapter but is the band a bit on the nose @quokka as you referred to them as a garlic band? 😭
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That was a short chapter but it’s a shame that it took so long to post this chapter it it appears almost as if you just wanted to finish the story as it’s an abrupt ending.
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Wow, looking forward to more of this story
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Paparazzi spot all of them?
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Another interesting story with a difference
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@quokka there is a small typo where you say that it must be nice to have suck caring fist cousins.
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There is a lot of research in these stories, @quokka do you have research staff or is this something that you enjoy doing?
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Yes that’s so obvious that he should do that but will Trent even think about it?
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I also think that Wallace is a closet case or is he just being a Wally? (Idiot)
