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A Land of Drought and Flooding Rains
Bft commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in A Land of Drought and Flooding Rains
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I can’t believe that people would throw foster kids out at 18 just because the child support payment stopped, it goes to show that the so-called foster parents are just in it for the money and don’t care about the kids that they are supposed to be providing a home for, I am sure that not all foster parents are tarred with the same brush and there are genuine people who love their foster children as if they were their biological children.
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Patricia was a vindictive woman
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Twins and brothers experimenting together is normal, but I think that mother may have been a bit nasty towards Dante being gay, maybe I am wrong?
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An interesting tale of life in Oz. It would be nice to know Cook’s name
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What is 21?
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More stores about CJ, Owen and the family, looking forward to reading this one. a cameo appearance from 2 other scribes on GA, which is good 😊
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Loved the start of the story, but Nina is an arrogant person who should not be on a vessel, I would not have employed her even if she is a good chef
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Ooh Cheddar cheese matured in the Wookey Hole Caves, in the Cheddar Gorge in Somerset. England https://www.fordfarm.com/cave-aged-cheddar/
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Woof, howl, woof, woof, howl, woof. Is that what you mean?
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A great chapter and another pup rescued, hopefully they can find a cure to reverse the damage that has been done to the pups. I think that Kage is helping the guys locate the pups. Is the premonition Elijah had his mate or is it another pup that needs to be rescued ?
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Don’t you mean Caleb will redeem himself if you have a say?
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Get well soon 🥰🌈
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I was kind of hoping that they had a boy and a girl as it would have been nice to have one of each. 👶👶
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Yes you did, I saw you do that. 😁
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My favourite line in this chapter was Loren wanked their child into existence, I haven’t thought of it like that before but that’s what happens 👶 Twins, yay just as well it’s not triplets 🌈😂👶
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Loved this story, can you please continue Noe and Jensen’s story. I will say that age is just a number, I am 14 years older than my husband and we get along really well, apart from his bad taste in music and the fact that he loves playing dull computer games and he likes football but I prefer rugby, I mean what’s not to like with all of those hot fit guys running around the paddock. 🥵 In October we will have been together 21 years and I wouldn’t change it for the world. 🥰🌈
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Loved this story about Virgil and Wyatt, I hope that you follow up with another book once they get to Larkspur and meet up with Virgil’s family.
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@kboissorry that your Mum has passed, as you said that she is free of dementia and and that’s a good thing. ❤️❤️
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Will Tyler and Elijah find their mates in the pack lands? I had to figure out what you meant by a directional? I am used to it being called a blinke, because it blinks or an indicator to indicate if you are going left or right
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I still use Vick’s when I have a cough
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Good chapter but please correct the error regarding this village On the island of Anglesey it’s in Wales not England Llanfairpwllgwyngyllgogerychwyrndrobwllllantysiliogogogoch The Welsh will have a fit, if they knew that you referred to them as English, they are not, Wales is a Country in its own right and has a Devolved Government to run it it translates to St Mary’s Church in the Hollow of the White Hazel near a Rapid
