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  1. MichaelS36

    Chapter 7

    Excellent chapter. I, like others am interested in the cost to Andrew for this insane visit. Black is based on a vile human being. His beliefs, I don't think I should mention here, so horrific are they. I'm a very patient man but I had to leave the interview room to take a break because I frankly, didn't think I could restrain myself for much longer. It's sometimes hard to believe there are people like this, so evil, so dead inside, but they walk among us everyday. I look forward to reading more about Matt and Andrew.
  2. MichaelS36

    Chapter 6

    Great chapter. Andrew's parents are understandably concerned about what he is going to do. Should he have spoken to a lawyer about this plan? Yes I think so. Would he be considered an accomplice? I'd leave that up to a lawyer. It's a crazy plan. But in my years as a police officer, I saw more insane people with crazy plans than I care to recall. Never underestimate what a human being may do. Looking forward to meeting Andrew's host, Mr. Black.
  3. MichaelS36

    Chapter 6

    Possibly, depending on the country you're in. In International waters if the crime took place on a ship, then it would be under the jurisdiction of the territory where the vessel is registered. In Ontario where we live, for the general public it is not a crime to not report a crime. Professionals such as doctors, lawyers and social workers have a duty to report. Failing to do so can result in loss of their license and possibly more. There are other situations involving people under 16 and elderly people, when you would be required to report. The smartest option if you're not sure would be to speak with a lawyer.
  4. MichaelS36

    Chapter 5

    Another excellent chapter that leaves the reader wondering what's to come. Thankfully, we know those answers are coming soon. Andrew seems to think obeying the rules will protect him. It's a crap shoot as to whether that's true or not. Looking forward to what's next.
  5. I hope you managed all right, girl. Let me know.
  6. MichaelS36

    Chapter 4

    I enjoyed this chapter. I don't have much to add to all of the excellent comments here today. There are some sleuths in this crowd. Turning to @kbois and @Mikiesboy writing together. I'd like advance warning before that begins please.
  7. MichaelS36

    Chapter 4

    You say there are more questions than answers and there have been no clues. Re the first question: There's a rather large clue in the title which might cause some readers to surmise there is some buying and selling going on. Given what we know about Matt and Andrew, it's a logical step to think Andrew may buy Matt. There are other possible meanings as well, but that's why some people might say such a thing. Turning to your second question: Obviously, Andrew isn't hurting for money, but perhaps since he stopped publishing for what was it? Three years, while he worked to get close to these traffickers. He had to live, and pay his housekeeper at the very least. Based on that those few facts, we may be able to assume he is no longer as wealthy. Why is he writing a book about human trafficking? That answer was in chapter two. He'd become interested in the topic after reading an article on the subject. In connection with your third question, I believe the author replied to that. It is quite true that many criminals of any type are still human. Often their criminal lives are hidden from the people they love. I won't continue as @Mikiesboy did reply in-depth to you. I hope the above is helpful.
  8. What you've been up against isn't easy. I'm proud of you girl. I'm sure Phil is as well and is happy to have you healthy and happy once more. you know tim and I are in with you in spirit. Take care of yourself.
  9. You'll enjoy it, molly. It's an excellent film. I am happy to see you're here. I hope you are keeping well. tim updates me when he hears from you.
  10. MichaelS36

    Chapter 3

    Wow. Now that I've gotten past the 24 out of 55 comments that have nothing to do with this story, I can say it was a great chapter. I'm looking forward to see what is ahead for Matt and Andrew. Both are in precarious places.
  11. I hope you are still improving @rickproehl. Take care of yourself.
  12. MichaelS36

    Chapter 2

    you'd be happy on your knees, would you girl? We'll see.
  13. MichaelS36

    Chapter 2

    Sadly, we don't live in the same part of the world ... or else. LOL
  14. MichaelS36

    Chapter 2

    Oh, you're a bratty girl. A gag and a couple of hours kneeling, will cure that. LOL
  15. MichaelS36

    Chapter 2

    He was a cop, not a judge. Behave you two! Don't make me come down there.
  16. MichaelS36

    Chapter 2

    I wonder for poor Matt, if he'll wish for the devil-he-knows once they get to their destination. And Andrew is living on a knife edge, trying to get close to these kind of criminals. He needs to take great care. tim often has food in his stories ... it's kind of his thing. he cooks for the three of us most days. he looks after Dan and I very well.
  17. MichaelS36

    Chapter 1

    You mention there is hope. That's something in the ether at the moment. We don't know much about Matt other than his choice of Danny as a friend was poor. Tomas and Ralf are low life hoods, doing the worst of jobs to make money.. exploiting others through trafficking. However, this is common place in our world, though luckily most people don't see it. Excellent start as Reader says. When are you posting this btw? Wednesdays only or??
  18. You are no burden, rick. It's good to see you and know you're doing better. Thank you for that. tim has mentioned several times he's concerned about you. Take your time and heal. I hope all goes well for you.
  19. Hope everyone is well. Thought I would drop in and make sure everyone is also.
  20. It was. He wrote six books, he did a lot in his life. Married to his wife for 69 years...she's doing okay. He cooked on a cruise ship, owned a car wash, was a DJ, a puppeteer, did some stand-up. A prize winning ad man, writer, creative director, agency owner. Author. Earned a degree in creative writing from John's Hopkins. Taught writing at the University of Toronto. He loved people and learning. An amazing man.
  21. Congratulations on your promotion, Wolf. Well deserved.
  22. Is there a situation? Perhaps I've missed something.
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