Potterslashfan

This chapter does not age well. Aaron is basically a stalker who basically sexually assaults Rory. In an age of "me too" this chapter was particularly difficult to read.

Another excellent chapter. Sheriff Morgan handled what had to be a huge shock of a new resident very well and very diplomatically.

A beautiful family that is fully committed to each other and a scenic, peaceful town. What could possibly go wrong?? Vivid imagery and characters that feel very rich already. Good job, so far!

This was a fantastic story! I loved seeing these 2 boys unpack their feelings for each other There were a couple of extraneous sub plots which almost bogged the story down. I'm not quite sure that the older sister's plot line really fit into the story. It just seemed like unnecessary filler tacked on at the end. I love how tight-knit the 4 boys are together, and I thought the evolution of Cathy's relationship with J was very realistic. Overall, great story! 4.5/5

Well the thing with the father makes more sense now, although I agree whole heartedly with Jonas, and I would be pissed off and disappointed that it wasn't really his father accepting him. Thank you for sharing this lovely little story with us!

This has been a well written and thoughtful fantasy story, which I binge read in one night. I'm glad things are ending great for Jonas, but the conclusion with the father just seemed too easy/neat. Just my opinion, though. I don't think that internalized homophobia is an excuse to abuse your son, or that abuse should be forgiven so easily.

"Wouldn't wear white".. hmmm, seems Opie had somewhat of an idea how the night would play out!

I have so many questions, but I'll hold on to them for now and see if they are answered in the narrative. It's a very interesting concept and story so far!

A beautiful love story with real emotions. Thank you for sharing it.

That was a beautiful, well paced story. I could feel the boys' love as well as their frustrations. Dad was awesome, and Mom will come around. Good story!

I think teenagers in real life put up with indecision and drama all the time. Its second nature for them!

Plus, if all he's done is suck him off, the risk of transmission is EXTREMELY low. Like struck by lightning low. But still, what a betrayal by his "friend"

Sam sure knows how to press buttons. That was incredibly hot! Good chapter.

Woops... My bad

I loved the proposal so much! "Jimmy just asked me to marry him" Funniest. Line. Ever.