Mac McNeill

While everyone is talking about the end of the Dom and sub, I was interested in the implosion of the apartments. I got to witness in January of 2000 the implosion of the Mapes Hotel in Reno. I watched it from the steps of the County Courthouse with non other than Judge Mills Lane. I was a Deputy Commissioner of Civil Marriages and my office was next door. Since I didn't have a ceremony, I went out and watched. It was a "straight down" implosion fortunately because the Truckee River ran right beside it. This chapter brought back memories.

I don't normally comment but this is one of the best chapters I've read, you've done a great job of perfectly describing Donald Trump's reaction.

Love the story very much. There are a few problems though. Beale Air Force Base is in California, not Nevada. The two air force bases in Nevada are Fallon which is NE of Reno and Nellis which is the Las Vegas area. I've read this story before but re-reading it to refresh my memory. Thanks.

I smell a forced marriage coming on, especially if Don gets his way.

I've already commented but some suggestions for continuation. There are so many characters in these books that there are easily stories about them either in their employment, schooling, or just general everyday life. Personally I would love to see more of the ones who are gay with problems they face. This last book seems to be more involved with the younger group who haven't determined their sexuality yet.

Please continue the series. I would like to see a bit more drama, but that's me. I love the problems that happened in the first book because it made it more interesting. While this book was good, it seemed not much happened in the last couple of chapters. I guess more school problems or problems with those who have moved away and perhaps had to come back home.

I have read most of your stories and loved them all. Thank you for the wonderful stories.

It's interesting to read this and even the comments back to 2013. In just a few short years it was ruled that Same Sex marriages were legal in all of these United States. Love the story all the way to the end. Thank you for your time in writing this those years ago.