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Laura S. Fox

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  1. Laura S. Fox

    Tin Soldiers

    Mason really has to solve the puzzle ... but he's not on his own. He might think love gets in the way, but that might not be as he thinks
  2. Chapter Eleven – Tin Soldiers Mason needed Toby and fast. Once he reached Levine’s place, he needed to be both surreptitious and quick about his intentions, and that meant that he had to have an idea about the layout of the house and any possible obstacles. Rhys had locked himself in that room with the keyboard, after announcing him and Billy that he felt inspired. Billy was in the surveillance room again, and Mason recalled what Toby had said about his partner spending too much time wat
  3. I'm happy to see you invested in this couple! Well, they will still have a lot of way to go, but hopefully, the journey will be entertaining!
  4. Thank you! You always have so nice words for me, I feel flattered. Mason ... yes, that's happening to him, and there's no way to fight that, right? Toby will continue to help, in every way he can!
  5. Wes is definitely one of the best resident detectives here on GA!
  6. Definitely, right?
  7. Toby's doing his best, considering that he cannot remember a thing! This, of course, will lead to more complications!
  8. And here's another vote of confidence for Billy. I'm glad!
  9. Ah, you know I can't divulge anything ... But, as far as sleuthing goes, you're doing great, Wes
  10. Hey, thanks for commenting! I won't insist a lot on that sort of lifestyle since I don't want to get technical about sexual practices and whatnot. But it is part of the characters and the things that make them tick, so it will be touched a little. Feel free to 'babble' all you want - although I don't ever think you do that As for confessions ... oh, boy ... those are hard ...
  11. Laura S. Fox

    Epilogue

    Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I know a lot of people feel the same about BSH. That story will always be special to me, even though I love all my writings.
  12. Laura S. Fox

    Epilogue

    So sorry for the later reply, I only now noticed it. I can tell you that they all ended up happy, and Carina got married. As for Zane and Dan, they took the big step eventually, too Thank you for reading!
  13. Chapter Ten – Level Of Attraction At least, the annoying ghost had chosen to run away. That didn’t mean, however, that there was anything comfortable about that situation. Rhys had draped one leg over Mason’s midsection, obviously on purpose, and his thigh pressed against a certain anatomical part that had a mind of its own. “You’re not sleeping,” Rhys cooed. “Not if you’re going to suffocate me, or talk all the time.” Rhys laughed, and Mason felt goosebumps everywhere. Rhys’s bo
  14. Ah ... Edward might have felt tempted, but hopefully he didn't study so much to become a doctor just to prove stupid by falling for the wrong guy. Thank you for the comment!
  15. The picture you put in my head is just too hilarious! And more will follow with Adrian and Edward! Thank you! That was a great characterization of Adrian!
  16. He's that kind of guy
  17. Chapter Twelve - The Awakening Of Edward Hastings Adrian munched on his lower lip as his eyes danced on the menu in front of him. Rich people did nothing by half, or so it seemed. “So we can have our balls licked and stuff?” he asked Edward directly. Edward chuckled. “I would like to believe that you feel more adventurous than this, Adrian.” “Also, all this, I want you to do it to me, not someone else,” Adrian added. “It wouldn’t count as cheating,” Edward said. “Why? Some du
  18. Laura S. Fox

    Eyes And Ears

    And another theory appears! Hold on to them, dear people! You will know how much you guessed when the story will be wrapped up! (And I will hand out virtual cookies to every one then).
  19. Laura S. Fox

    Eyes And Ears

    Poor Mason, huh? Let's see ...
  20. Laura S. Fox

    Eyes And Ears

    Well ... that's pretty much spot on! I narrowed the story perspective to one character, so he's the only one whose motives should be clear! (Another personality living inside would have complicated things a lot).
  21. Laura S. Fox

    Eyes And Ears

    Totally frustrated doesn't cover it! As for the new character ... keep an eye on him!
  22. Laura S. Fox

    Eyes And Ears

    He-he-he ... thanks a lot! Jessica Fletcher should be on the case!
  23. Laura S. Fox

    Eyes And Ears

    Thank you for thinking so highly on my story! For some reason I don't understand, as you explained the meaning of the word pedantic, the elevator scene with Winona Ryder having Ethan Hawke explaining the word 'irony' in Reality Bites came to mind. Or maybe there was no clear reason! Just weird how the mind works!
  24. Laura S. Fox

    Eyes And Ears

    Your heart won't be broken ... but you will have a big surprise! Just saying!
  25. Laura S. Fox

    Eyes And Ears

    All implemented, and they were useful. Except the handle/treat. Treat appears to sound a little better. I'm glad they weren't more. Just for the record, when I do go through the text before publishing it, there are plenty more others. For each one you listed here, there were at least several more.
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