Laura S. Fox
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Oh, I'm surely happy to hear all your speculations. And I intended the comment to be really endearing, he-he ... In this story, some things will be out in the open, while others will be hidden, so I hope you'll have fun trying to guess what's what. And you're right about one thing. Billy knows a lot about Rhys, not just as a fanboy ... I will this here!
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I guess you already got the answer
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Oh, I totally promise that! The outline for this story already looks like a bunch of intersecting lines, but I like to think that I have it all figured out and even the tiniest bits will have a logical explanation (that will be revealed all at the right moments). Thank you for reading this story, too! And commenting on it!
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I'm glad that I'm recognized as what I am, a cliffhanger obsessed writer!
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That you are, Wes, he-he! But the problem with my masterplans is that sometimes they tend to change despite my initial masterplans!
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Wow, you're the first reader to hint at that - I'm talking about the last line of your comment - and boy, you're correct! (I'm so surprised since that's something I'm just outlining on the fly)
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Just see my reply to @spyke above
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Who? Kung Fu Panda? You've seen the movie(s), right?
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It's so entertaining to discover that my readers can be evil-er than me! I'm not going to say anything more, but I'll snicker to myself for a while! (And expect curve balls and cliffies and many other things, lol)
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That's quite insightful, especially about the part with the bodyguards! There is more to it, but that's a good foundation and a reasonable one, too! Thank you for letting me know what you guessed so far!
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Hmm, let me do the math ... so we add here, and then extract, and then divide ... I think you are 43.76% right! Good score, trust me! It should be higher, but your theory is based - logically - only on the clues offered so far, so you can't guess what other elements will appear along the way. But I'm glad to continue to hear your theories! It's so interesting to find out what other people are thinking!
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Chapter Four – Lost Children Mason moved the toolbox from one hand to another and knocked on Rhys’s bedroom door. It seemed that the earlier ruckus had worn out Rhys a little, and he had asked to be left to sleep for a while. At least, he had eaten a pancake, and Mason had had to be satisfied with that. Seeing how skinny Rhys was, it was a miracle he didn’t come undone at any moment. Still, he had a job to do, and he hadn’t forgotten about the camera that he needed to install on the balc
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It's great to hear that people re-read my stories! That's seldom the case with romance novels (or I might just be wrong). Thank you for your appreciation!
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Right! LOL!
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I'm definitely glad to hear that Juggling with multiple characters is a lot of fun, but also challenging!
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He-he, thanks a lot!
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I won't make any assumptions ...
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Chapter Nine – That Makes Two Of Us Adrian studied the expensive pen in his hand, seemingly fascinated with its craftsmanship. Edward had nothing to worry about. During the week, Adrian was mostly all work and no play, but, of course, that was not at all why he cared about keeping his promises. Just like the luxury item in his hand, Edward was intriguing him and very much pleased him, which was not something he could say about any partner he had ever shared fleeting moments of pleasure with.
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At least, it's good to know that you still find the story entertaining at a second reading!
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That was pretty on point and descriptive! As for your praise ... I don't have enough words to express my gratitude! I'm glad you're enjoying this story, too!
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Something is happening with Rhys, as the pieces of the puzzle will start to come together, or as more is revealed. The entire story will be from Mason's POV, so when he learns something new, everyone will Thank you for being invested in my story, and thank you for liking Billy!
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Ha-ha, I had no idea at the time that this expression would work in English ... it appears that it does!
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Everything on point, Dave! So feel free to keep your speculations coming!
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Who the ghost is will be revealed quite soon So your comments will receive their stamp of approval when that happens. But there's a deeper mystery here to be solved, and I hope people who read the story will join Mason in putting the pieces of the puzzle together!
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Corrected. Truth be told, I didn't realize it was 'shining armor'. Anything else you noticed?
