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Reinforcements Have Arrived
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Reinforcements Have Arrived
As I said before, let's not get all violent, lol! And Jett's dad is here to stay for now (evil laughter). He is instrumental for how the story will progress, so he has his uses -
Reinforcements Have Arrived
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Reinforcements Have Arrived
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Chapter Thirty – Reinforcements Have Arrived April walked into the backyard, holding the phone tightly and looking carefully around to make sure that no one would notice. Actually, he cared about Jett’s dad not to overhear his conversation. However, by how moody Jett was, April didn’t want to be in the position to offer too many explanations to him either. “We can talk now.” “So, Jett’s dad is back home? I didn’t want to comment on it since it wasn’t my business, but I thought Jett w
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How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Oh, no, let's not go there .... brrrr -
How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Sid will surely make an entrance. As for the consequences of his words and actions, they might not be what April hopes they will be! (insert evil laughter here and I'll leave you with that!) -
How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
I agree with you, especially about needing an entire village to raise a child. But there is more to that than Jett's dad's convictions regarding the traditional family. It will all become clear, I hope, as the story goes! -
How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Let's not get all in a murderous mode, lol! Jett's dad still has to go through some transformations, too! Thanks for reading! -
How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
That would be quite the scene, lol! But I'm more forgiving with the characters than some of my readers, and I won't let them end up in such embarrassing situations, he-he-he ... The big reveal, eh, sigh, it will come at the right moment. And it will be maybe not as crazy as some may imagine, but I hope it will contain all the emotions that I've been working to reveal throughout the entire story. (And you're so right about Sid and what he thinks of it all.) -
How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Maybe April is better at handling tough men than others, lol! He will have an interesting conversation with his dad next time. -
How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Yes, families tend to be complicated like that, don't they? And Jett might not be telling the whole truth, one way or another. What he might need to do more than anything is to be true to himself -
I certainly hope not!
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How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Yes, thank you! I actually think the same, and that is why I believe that April's dad's reaction won't surprise you You will see what I mean next time! -
How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Well, we will have to wait and see what happens with Jett's dad! But the joke would have worked about the name, lol! -
How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Laura S. Fox posted new chapter in Be The Father Of This Child!
Chapter Twenty-Nine – How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled? Jett examined his dad from under furrowed eyebrows. “What do you think he’ll ask of us next?” Carina whispered, taking him by surprise. “Stop creeping on me like this. I’m thinking.” Jett turned to his observation of the enemy. His dad was inspecting each surface with a magnifying glass. If there were one speck of dust he found, Jett would eat it, that sure he was that the house was pristine clean now. “Yes, ‘mkay,”- 21 comments
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Definitely glad to hear that!
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I see you guessed correctly! (And I'm not saying anything more)
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Fair point! Things will become clear as the story goes.
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Yes, and I'm glad you paid attention! The chaos will just get bigger and bigger, until it will reach a tipping point!
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Oh, thank you so much! It really warms my heart that my story can help a little.
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Again, pure evil! Mastermind evil!
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You will see why A bit later. He might be an ass, but he's still Jett's dad.
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Are you trying to say that Dan would fit in more like Jett's boyfriend? LOL! (I know you didn't quite say that, but I wanted to interpret it that way). Also, I miss your funny gifs!
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Oh gawd, so many good ideas, and not even one of them crossed my mind! Damn! It's clearly that you have an evil-er mind than me! And it's reassuring! That means I'm not all that bad, lol! And forgive me for finally realizing or realizing only now what you meant when you said that you try to avoid patreon spoilers. It's only when Dan as your name and your avatar finally came into focus! Damn, I'm so blind, lol! Thank you for being so consistent about avoiding spoilers, though! It must take a will of steel! So thank you, again!
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He surely is a stubborn old man, and even I have problems reining him in, lol! Thank you, as always, for your positive and enthusiastic comments! As for the attack and the entire situation, reinforcements truly are under way!
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Oh, that last line just killed me, lol! But you're closer to the truth than you might even think. As for irritating you, I apologize from the bottom of my heart, I just had the reveal moment so clear in my head from the start of the story that I stuck with it! And, in the meantime, of course, the story got very convoluted and I found myself pushing and pushing and pushing that moment! But, when it comes, I hope you'll have it in your heart to forgive me!
