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Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Oh, damn, where do I begin ... The shower scene, lol, that would transcend everything I've ever thought of writing for this story! A much frightened April would become even more scared only listening to this scenario, he-he. But it does have its perks, like April revealing who he is ... but not yet! (Oh, people will so cuss at me for dragging this, I'm sure. Good thing that there are so many stories here and they will forget to stay mad at me.) You are spot on about Jett, as usual! Yes, he's the one who's always up front about what he feels, so he won't hide from his dad. Of course, that will cause the proverbial fan people already talked about in the comments to spin even faster. The time is not yet for April to reveal everything; right now, everyone will pick a side, and you can imagine which sides those will be. In all this convoluted situation, April won't slip uncomfortable truths so easily. Carina will have to learn to be a better person, too, and I think you will like her more as the story continues! Thank you for your long comment, and for taking the time to write one! -
Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Just When Things Were Going So Swell
There will be some explosions, without a doubt! -
Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Just When Things Were Going So Swell
The sleeping arrangements will be disclosed next time! -
Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Oh, no, not a boy with long hair ... I liked them best while young, and too often, they needed to cut their hair if they wanted to be allowed in the classroom, lol! (There must have been some tears) -
Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Just When Things Were Going So Swell
You can rest assured that a full-on battle is ahead, with Jett's dad at home! In my country, the people in the military might not be as strict as in the US, and I lived among them when I was little, but some can be pretty tough on their kids, hence my choice of profession for Jett's dad. But since I was a girl, I might not have seen just how tough a dad like that could be, lol! Boys seem to get the short end of the stick in the situation. You might get a mild version of a military man, as a result, in this particular story! -
Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Just When Things Were Going So Swell
I guess that's good advice! -
Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Ha-ha-ha, I'm glad he's your type! As for snacks, feel free to indulge in your favorites, next time! (And I knew you'd like Carina) -
Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Just When Things Were Going So Swell
I guess it does! And now everyone knows the mystery about Jett's dad! -
Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Ha-ha-ha, that's not a nice image, but it pretty much sums everything up! -
Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Laura S. Fox posted new chapter in Be The Father Of This Child!
Chapter Twenty-Seven – Just When Things Were Going So Swell “Hush, hush,” April urged Jett as his lover’s soft grunts had a tendency of getting louder and louder. Jett pushed inside him and grabbed hold of his hair; then, he nuzzled April’s ear. “You’re slobbering all over,” April complained, but in a quiet voice. “You’re something, dweeb,” Jett whispered in his ear. “The moment you said ‘yes’, you knew I was going to fuck you.” “With the promise that we would be silent,” Apr- 26 comments
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Don’t You Want To Fight For Me?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Don’t You Want To Fight For Me?
He-he, I would love to know how that Japanese phrase sounds! And you all guys will hate me a little for pushing the moment of truth a little later, but I want to believe that the wait will be all worth it! And thank you for another piece of poetry! -
Don’t You Want To Fight For Me?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Don’t You Want To Fight For Me?
I guess so, Dave, yeah! Just like @droughtquake said earlier, it may be Jay who puts all the puzzle pieces together in the end! -
Don’t You Want To Fight For Me?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Don’t You Want To Fight For Me?
That's right, lol! And it does sound like the name of a medicine, maybe something you should take to fight the seasonal blues or something! -
Don’t You Want To Fight For Me?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Don’t You Want To Fight For Me?
Lol, yeah, I think Jay can be quite the detective! Something like ... (and you know there's a meme coming!) -
Don’t You Want To Fight For Me?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Don’t You Want To Fight For Me?
Well, I can't tell you anything, or will count as spoilers, but I'm glad you enjoy the story! There is still some of it left! -
Don’t You Want To Fight For Me?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Don’t You Want To Fight For Me?
Hmm, you are on the right path, Wes .... As for that choice, yes, the story will have its ups and downs and will influence the characters and their decisions, in the end. As for daddykins ... well, he'll be a sight to behold, he-he-he ... -
Chapter Twenty-Six – Don’t You Want To Fight For Me? Carina caressed Jay gently and then looked up at Jett. “Who should talk first? Me or you?” “You start.” Jett crossed his arms over his chest. “All right. Where?” “From the beginning. Why didn’t you tell me you were pregnant?” “I didn’t want to.” “Just like that?” “Just like that.” Carina squared her eyes on him. Now that Jett was thinking of it better, Jay tended to give him sort of the same look when he was annoyed
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Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
All righty, as I promised other people here, the next chappie will come on Thursday as an exception for all the people who find it difficult to stay indoors! -
Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
It will happen And it will be quite the surprise, and let's leave it at that. But there's still much of the story until then. -
Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Ah, that will be quite the reunion, right? And the dads will come into play, I can tell you that! But not just yet! -
Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Oh, the pickle will be solved. It's true all that you say about Jett and his feelings for April, and also true that Carina knows a bit about everything. As for April talking without thinking first, he will get his just deserts, lol. Jett will surely put him straight (no, that's not what I meant ... he-he) Next chappie is planned for Thursday, this time, so that I can bring a bit of solace to everyone who's forced to stay in doors So, all I can say is - stay tuned! (And thanks again for your insightful feeback) -
Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
That is correct, but more and more everywhere you look the same thing happens, not only in the US. Maybe there is more distancing, and even without a pandemic to worry about. -
Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Yes, that's right, lol! Another proof that my readers have an even twistier mind than me, which is helpful and soothing for my poor soul! -
Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Now that would have been a crazy twist even for me, lol! -
Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Thank you for trusting in my abilities as a magician! Due to @Tonyr's nagging (I hope it's not a strong word, I aim for endearing here), the next chapter will come sooner so that you can know what happens a bit faster!
