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  1. Laura S. Fox
    You might be a little surprised ...
  2. Laura S. Fox
    Well, that's correct And there's still more to learn. Thanks!
  3. Laura S. Fox
    I'm glad you do
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    Epilogue

    Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Epilogue

    Thank you for enduring through all 35 chapters! I know that my decision to make Carter forget about the body swap made some of the readers a bit sad just like you, but it was one of the first things I decided on since I wrote the first notes for this story. On the other hand, you can say that the 'dream theory' you had,was partially correct, because that was what it felt to Carter after Mark gives him the mints. Also, I wanted to point out that the most important things in life are the ones we should care about, leaving alone the clutter. (But maybe I was a bit too on the nose with that)
  5. Laura S. Fox
    Thank you! That's what Heathcliff is, the perfect medicine - we all know how much he likes all health related stuff
  6. Laura S. Fox
    Don't put it behind Heath! The man knows how to get what he wants!
  7. Laura S. Fox
    Heath is down with doing plenty of extra work to have his pet bunny happy. So, yeah, that pretty much sums up one of the directions this story will take
  8. Laura S. Fox
    Awww, so sweet, right?
  9. Laura S. Fox
    That's actually what I'm trying to point out. For Heath, all is easy (or so it seems). He's the one in the position of power, so to speak, and that is a challenge for Aidan, not just from one point of view. With time, the 'realness' will set in, and Heath will have as much to learn as Aidan - if not more. Thank you for keeping up with the story!
  10. Laura S. Fox
    Of course that's what Heath is! Your description of him is quite spot on. And that's quite an angle I'm willing to work. You'll see! (And Heath would so love to have Aidan close all the time)
  11. Laura S. Fox
    Heath will surely love to do that. But they will take some time to get there, and fall on the same page. Thank you for commenting!
  12. Laura S. Fox
    That's the key to the story And by the end of the story, you will know all about what happened that day. It's a little funny because I thought everyone would wonder about the accident!
  13. Laura S. Fox
    Chapter Nine - When Will You Be Home? “So, was no one else available to take care of all these?” Aidan questioned while pointing with a pen at the huge stack of folders on his desk. One of the promises he had made to himself was to be more assertive. At least, that was one of the things the motivation audio books he was listening to on his way to work every day tried to teach him. ‘Tried’ being the operative word since Aidan had proven to be nothing but a mediocre student in that respect
  14. Laura S. Fox
    Ha, ha, if only. Mark's eyes are just another piece of the puzzle. As for Carter becoming more and more susceptible to male charms, that might happen, too, lol!
  15. Laura S. Fox
    I believe I saw a movie, a very long time ago, with a guy who got swapped with a woman's body, and it was pretty hilarious, starting with the point of going to the bathroom and searching for missing parts with a full bladder. I think it would be quite confusing, and, in some parts of the story, I struggled with the idea of how to best point out this type of confusion for the main character. I think I've always enjoyed the body swap thing in fiction or otherwise and that's why I wanted to write this type of story. Thanks for the insightful comment!
  16. Laura S. Fox
    Everything in this commentary is well spot on. I mainly used the 'body swap' trope here as a vehicle for experimentation. Carter, of course, will have to decide if what he feels - including physically wise - is real, or just the side effect of walking and breathing in another person's skin. The dream theory ... I can't recall right now if someone else wondered about it. You're both right and wrong, but you'll have to read the entire story for that particular puzzle to solve Thanks for keeping up with the story.
  17. Laura S. Fox
    Well, I pretty much assigned Alex the 'villain' role, so I know I got one thing right as people's reactions to him were completely warranted. More of how Aron got married to Alex, and what made him do it, you will sometime down the road. He will speak about it at large
  18. Laura S. Fox
    Thanks a lot! I hope you're going to enjoy it to its very end (which is only 34 chapters from here on out)
  19. Laura S. Fox
    Ha, ha, I like the cold shower pun! I'm sure Heath wouldn't appreciate a cold shower ever! Thank you for making me laugh!
  20. Laura S. Fox
    Hmm, yeap, that should happen Aidan is trying too hard. Thanks for noticing that!
  21. Laura S. Fox
    Yes, you are correct. Aidan should take a little breather. I'm afraid that Heath won't let him, though Thank you for stopping by, like always!
  22. Laura S. Fox
    I'm sure you'd make a good one, Wes
  23. Laura S. Fox
    Can't add anything to this ... lol!
  24. Laura S. Fox
    Yes, Aidan is! (#notmyfault) :))
  25. Laura S. Fox
    Well, that would surely be a good strategy, me thinks! And a way for Aidan to secure the promotion he dearly seeks, he-he. But, come on, there couldn't be any projects better than this :))
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