Laura S. Fox
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Yeah... I mean, I think we all do that in real life when we know someone for a long time. We're getting used to their idiosyncrasies that only an outside would consider them strange. It's also for keeping the balance, the status quo.
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Oh, yes! The way he speaks... of course! And they're both doctors! I guess things like that are so deep in my subconscious that they resurface naturally in my writing. How would a posh 'jerk' sound like? Ah, just like that.
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It does fit, but it says more about Brad's attitude toward love and commitment than anything else. Lyn might like to believe Brad doesn't see it... but the readers may very well read these scenes with a clear head.
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I think you meant Lyn But yes, we have both sides! And Lyn is way too rigid and harsh with himself...
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Ha-ha, and we have the other side, cheering then getting frustrated over Lyn's choice Looking for 30 seconds? Lol, is there a time limit before it gets awkward?
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I knew readers might split in two sides about 'looking' and 'not looking'. Lyn, I believe, does have a strong moral compass, hence his hesitation to do something perceived by him as wrong. Two things Brad is right about... oh, yes But we'll see.
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Hmm, hmm, I see. It's so cool to see how you, readers, build the characters based on the puzzle pieces I give you.
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I like it how the readers' focus is on this line... and for a good reason. It says so much about how Brad perceives the situation.
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Oh, gawd, so, so true, lol!
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...also, he might see into the future! a clairvoyant, really, nope, wrong story
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Chapter Seventeen – What Are You Afraid Of? Their little get-together didn’t go as planned at all. Alexander had managed to piss Brad off – which was an accomplishment, as Brad wasn’t the sort to hold grudges and didn’t get upset easily – and even he, Lyn, had said unpleasant things as if he wanted to ruin everything. As much as Lyn disliked the idea, for Brad, his two friends from college came as a package deal. If Alexander got too bored with their little vacation and decided to leav
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I'd say you can just skip ch. 54, but there are things they talk to each other that are still important, imo.
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Thank you, Chris! Time for their happy end!
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Someone knows me too well!!
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Thank you! I thought it would fit them!
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How could he not? All that tender meat :)) It was about high time Jamie realized what he wanted.
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Of course... They deserve to be together.
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Um, should I tell that Santa is also... no, I'm stopping right here Melinda will make an appearance, not in ch. 54, but in ch. 55. Also, I reserve a surprise cameo appearance in the epilogue.
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Thanks a lot. I believe they do deserve it after everything they went through.
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Yes, it is! For anyone who doubted there would be a HEA this time... hey, that's my middle name, I can't just drop it!
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Love the handle... it sounds a little Korean, lol. Jamie and Hearst together make one boy band boy
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Chapter Fifty-Four – This Talking Thing “Winning, huh?” Jamie leaned forward and placed a slow, meaningful kiss on Hearst’s lips. “Do you feel like a winner now, rabbit?” “I definitely do,” Hearst confirmed. “It can’t be real, though. I mean, did I really win you?” “What’s so hard to believe?” “But I got close to you for all the wrong reasons.” “I suppose we wouldn’t be the first to get together that way in the history of humankind.” “Okay,” Hearst admitted, trying
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OMG, the jokes and puns just write themselves at this point... no, it's all Maestro's imagination
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They will find them! As tempting as letting Anthony suffer... Danny is too kind. Also, he needs to prove himself because that's who he is!
