Krista

Relatability and Consistency is key. You have to give them enough human qualities that the reader/viewer can see the humanity within them so they can relate to them. It also makes them believable. Consistency! Don't keep adding or taking away from the character's ability(ies). Consistency is important throughout a lot of other genres, but in Fantasy/Super Hero stuff writers have the tendency to surprise readers with a new power or a new ability or a new hindrance to fit their plot instead of keeping the character within their primary mold. If you create a weakness.. don't take it away. If you create a power that goes one way... keep it going that way. Mind reading/Future telling seems to be the one most writers struggle with. Need to be careful and specific with the limitations and the way they do it.

The 'experts' say that my region is due for a major earthquake. I'm pretty sure none of the structures, like bridges, or buildings were planned with the thought of making it through a major earthquake. They are not something people could really predict when the pressure is too over loaded to cause the earthquake. We are though better prepared for Tornadoes, with the live Doppler and the news, sirens, and phone calls. Unlike earthquakes, tornadoes are predictable based on weather patterns, air masses/pressure, and temperature. Different regions are likely more prepared... and I think if people prepare after a few disasters the better. You can learn how to react and prepare for an earthquake by following what people do in earthquake prone zones. Learn how to stay safe within a structure. What supplies would be best to keep in a secure/safe place. There are some things you just cannot prepare for though.. like the power plant, if it fails, that's not on you. That was a loss for the experts, their failure. Usually individuals and what the individual needs. Personally - I am not prepared for any natural disaster. (Slaps wrist.. bad Krista bad)

Yeah.. his Daddy will get worse before it gets better.. hint hint.. I was actually worried about how Cora - his mother will be portrayed throughout the story. Glad people are seeing the.. sort of subtle strength and power she has over her husband.. Even when he's growling like a big bear.. lol.

Happy Birthday Momma Rush! I hope you had a wonderful one.

Thanks! I'm glad you are liking the story and reading! There have been many breaking points in this story between Corey and his father Lee, but Corey never took it to that level, he always backed off... will he ever take it to that level?

SIS 17 By the time Clinton stopped kissing me we were both sweating from the heat of the day and I didn’t feel the strangeness of kissing him anymore. I hoped it lasted. Trouble was starting to get anxious, which was the reason he broke the last kiss with a smile. She had attempted to jump onto the lounge chair that we were both on. The smell of him was intensified by the heat, both our bodies shining in the intense sun. “Wow,” I whispered causing him to smirk as he sat up. “I t

Hope you had a very nice Birthday!!! --- and if you haven't it is the weekend... Behave.

Happy Birthday!! Have a great one.

Happy Birthday! Have a great one.

Happy Birthday! Have a great one!

Well since you're my Beta/Editor you will be the first to know.. . LOL! *Kisses*

Oooohh.. you learn more about Cj in the next chapter for sure. Sorry to be vague.. especially since I'm known for delays.. lol.. BUT! I'm soo glad you're reading.

Oh wow, thank you Lisa! And.. ME! I don't write cliffies.. even lil ones.. lol. Sorry that you had to re-read chapter 15 just so you could read 16. lol. Yeah.. Corey's Dad Lee is a piece of work, but he's not that far from the norm - for small towns where high school sports are everything.

Thanks for reading and keeping up with me through all the delays of a busy life.. Sorry about that! Glad you like the story.

SIS 16 The next morning I woke up, I searched the bed for Trouble, not seeing her asleep on the bed I sat up. The bedroom door was open, but I remembered closing it the night before. I slid out of bed already dreading the mess she was sure to make while I slept. I hesitated at the door remembering last night. I never really gave myself time to process it all. He had kissed me and I kissed him back. I didn’t really understand how I got to that point. I had trouble trusting him, but all

Have a Happy Birthday!!! Behave..

That's nice! And he's still actively participating in the sport. Most of the athletes come out when they've no longer been in the public eye for a long time.

Lol that name.. shew James. And the article says that number is from Alcohol related injuries, not all of them are from those.. lol.

Tsk tsk tsk.. someone has turned their safe search off... you dirty little thing, you.

Referees not accustomed to the NFL are having to referee these games because the originally employed Referees got a little greedy and wanted a raise and all that junk.... so you shouldn't blame the "rookie" or overwhelmed referees in these games, you should blame the greedy 200,000 dollar salaries the original referees wanted just to watch a football game and keep grown assed men in line.

It is a higher absorption rate... it is a quicker way to get drunk on a more potent level.. very dangerous technique to partake in as you cannot stop the absorption and your body cannot readily reject it - like say if it was in your stomach. It's also disgusting.. bleh.

Have a..... happy happy happy Happy Birthday!! .... And do try to behave.

Thank you! Sorry about a delay.. I've been really busy.. and I've been on a bit of a writing hiatus.. as well.

I can't help it if you're lacking in your reading and I actually had a one up on you.. lmao. It didn't last long did it..

Yes.. I saw that. lol. hmm.. I think some of it got lost between my many documentation transitions.. sigh.. at least it was just a few words.