Krista

Yeah, very limited experiences there. Can't really expect the same outcome if you're watching such things on the interwebs either... it isn't realistic.

I was warned you had this kind of potential. *shakes head*

He gives me dirty looks when I reach for the sauce after he fixes steaks, but I smile and add more. I also like mine done a bit more than he does as well. I forgive him for his dirty jokes and what have you, he can forgive me this. Or he can be the little spoon to our 100lb lab/coon dog mix. I win a lot of disagreements with that threat alone. Taking away me as his plaything wins me the other half.

Excuse you, sir... but I'm innocent. Oh ffs, I finally responded to the fabulous one thing...

Me... totally me. I don't know if the therapist I'll be seeking out after this will be professionally prepared to handle all this.

Oh no, I've been married to that man long enough for him to have witnessed me watching saucy films. Well I make him watch them with me, to be fair (and I do mean actual Plot driven films like from Hollywood, before you people freak out). The other day I was watching Heated Rivalry on my laptop and he got curious right in the middle of one of the many sex scenes the show provides. Taught him a lesson, I'm sure.

Sigh.. I did. I gave right in to y'all, because this is new writing. It wasn't in the original. But I kept thinking... I can't allow this to not be a thing that I leave out. I have worked on their relationship up to the flirting, deeper thoughts, connections, and if I 'never' allow them to go where they're naturally wanting to go... I'll be ran out of my own comments section. But I may end up ran out anyway... 😮 but we'll see if I can be brave.

Now wait a minute... vacuum lines on the carpet, perfectly straight you say? You should have led with that. Although, there's no carpet in my house. The rugs on the other hand still would require that sort of attention But, the fact that you're that detailed oriented whilst cleaning... come on now. I'm feeling a slight regret here.

Well that sold me, Joel is the bottom. Congratulations. To add... Davin read to me as someone who was living by.. "fake it til you make it..." he didn't know exactly what he was doing... but was confident in what he was doing in order to do it. He may have some experience, maybe with himself.. he hasn't said as much though.

I'm personally not sold on Joel being a bottom. But if it saves me 40k words in writing, sure he can be the bottom, because I'd have to introduce a lot of other variables and character stuff for all of that to take shape. And, it isn't you, it's me. That should work, surely? *whistles* Also, you have far too much energy and training requirements before you'd be suitable as my pet.

Okay, I'll have to take deep breaths. I wrote this chapter, I know what's in it. I can't turn around and be all bashful in the comments section now. But yeah, they experimented a lot farther than they've been before. Going from just a mutual J/o to everything they did in this chapter. Joel isn't ready for the next step, you're right. So it might be a process. Unless Davin is the more willing one after it is all settled. It could end up being both of them as well. It is difficult to put a lot of weight on first times. Joel seemed to enjoy everything Davin did to him. Davin was eager to do everything he wanted in order to get Joel there too, so.

So are you a.. "A good steak doesn't need sauce..." person, or are you a... "A steak, good or not, it is okay to add a little sauce on?" Because, those discussions get heated... my husband is of the mind that a nicely prepared steak needs no help from a sauce. I desire sauce on my steak..

I did not read or remember the little agreement/wager you had going on with @Okiegrad, but it wouldn't have changed my mind. I also can assure you no money changed hands, my part I played in this was completely free. And it would have been if I had known I actually had a part to play, regardless. Well you know, they liked how they looked in wet underwear before, why not do it again? Although they didn't keep the underwear on long into the shower for the full effect of anything, but having wet underwear really. Oh god.. Pizza doesn't need to be treated all filthy like that... no. 😮 But yeah, it was an ice breaker. Yeah, I lead with personality and character first, even in those scenes. I know I'm not good at writing sex scenes, so to overcompensate I add dialog, humor, seriousness, plot points, etc to round it all out. This chapter would've been about 3k words shorter if I focused primarily on getting them laid, which some of my chapters are too long so it would have evened things out. First time awkwardness is fun to write. Not knowing what they want, how to go truly about it. I mean, Davin was the bravest first timer I've ever wrote, there are very experienced gay guys out there that will never, ever come close to sticking their tongue where he did... and he did it his first time. I wanted Davin to be the confident one. It didn't make sense for Joel to be. I almost switched it, but decided not to. Joel has a tough time letting go of control and sex is something you have to be willing to release some of it... unless you're into control/kinks. Unfortunately for him, he's not. lol. Are we as a group sold on Joel being the bottom. And you'll find that I never listen to direct demands. Bribery is far more efficient and has better outcomes.

Yes, poor Lacey. That makes twice she's been turned down for movie/family night by Joel. You would think so. I get the house is fancy and expensive, and they seem anal... but they're not there. Lol. Well, we all know what the Twin's priorities are. He was thinking about food whilst on his way to get filthy, or the hopes of it anyway. Poor Joel, he'll learn that at least for Davin is is belly first, sex later. Which is rather typical, I'm thinking? Well really it would be sex, food, then more sex.. but let's be real here. Yes, he sure did. Pizza at that, something Joel doesn't even really like, mostly. Bedrooms and Bathrooms would be the only places I'd feel comfortable after knowing about their insistence of cameras and knowing why their own sons would be stopping in. But, the boy was distracted. He is a beautiful man. Aww. Shower scene... it was almost a hot tub scene.. decided against it, for reasons. Then I was thinking... I honestly don't know if Davin would feel comfortable having sex in that bed... I mean, realistically, I don't think it would have stopped them. In fact, Davin probably would have tried to destroy that bed in the process. --- Food for thought? Maybe? So the shower ended up being 'the' spot. Oh goodness me... 😮 Oh goodness me x2 Do we know who the bottom is going to be? I mean sure, Davin talked a finger into the equation, but Joel outright "cock blocked" Davin by focusing on something else instead. Joel did like the attention when he got it there though, so who knows.

Thank you for not judging harshly, much appreciated. And if they are mistaken and there has been cameras placed around the house, then their mother got an eye full of a bouncy orange ass and bulge at least to and from the kitchen and bathroom. Maybe it is safe to say they don't have them inside the house, because I would imagine her calling Davin back if she saw the makings of that going on. Also to be fair, if they're going through that much trouble to watch the house, at least in the living room and such, it would make sense for them to have them.

Oh goodness... opening act. I don't know if I have it in me to do this again. And I don't even want to know about the rest. lol

Lol. hmm. I don't think my doggos would like me having a third pet. You spoiling yourself in the comments is rather on brand for you, I'm thinking. tsk. tsk. tsk.

I guess so! Lol. I knew it all was going to fall right during the Holiday weekend and @wildone got his edits in, actually last night. I didn't post until today, mostly because I went to bed whilst he was editing and didn't think he'd finish. Shouldn't have doubted the man. You're welcome for the surprise. Scenes like this is very... off putting for me to write. I don't see myself as someone who writes sex well... these two have had two encounters so far. This one a lot more full-on. I think it was like 70% of the chapter... glad I was able to sneak a little plot in there, otherwise I'd have to call this smut. 😮 With that, Merry Christmas to you as well.

It did, it took ages. I would be too afraid to focus on someone that's ace, non-binary, trans, or something of that nature. I wouldn't do it correctly. Joel and Davin finally took getting some privacy into their own hands, so to speak. Even then, it was sort of an awkward mess, but they got there in the end and that's all that matters. It was good for 'them.'

I have a feeling this is the chapter where I'll mostly reply with: and move along to the next comment...

Tis Tuesday. Also, don't judge me too harshly with what you're going to read this chapter... I tried my best.

Like Davin predicted, not long after Colt finished with his shower, he and Gavin left. That meant Davin and I were stranded at the house unless we borrowed one of the vehicles here. Seeing them leaving the house I felt my heart pick up in my chest. Davin was snacking on one of the last no-bake cookies. Despite loving sugar and chocolate, it fought me all the way down. Downing my glass of ice water I stared at the front door. “Do you wanna have a movie night, Joel?” Lacey asked and I blinked