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Oooh so the two families meet (or at least some members). So, the Morgans have some unusual abilities, it seems. I wonder what they are... Does Connor have a wife? And what happened with Dolon? I am definitely hooked!
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Nice start, I'm already interested and want to read more!
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Just wait, there's more to be seen from Pepin... After having a nightmare about spiders, waking up to this comment did not help! Thanks for the comments tho!
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Haha you sure were right about that. XD
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Thank you! Oh, Mitch is the guy they met at the hotel when they were swimming together in the pool.
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Thank you both! I know the last few chapters have been sad, but that was necessary before their story takes a turn for the better.
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(Adam) Laying in royal blue sheets in the comfortable king-size bed, Kaleo and I were pressed against each other, our breathing being the only sound in the room. As I gently caressed his long, black hair and placed a tender kiss on the top of his head, my heart ached for him. Losing a grandparent that one is so close to, as Kaleo was to his grandpa, can be so rough. I didn't even know the old man very well, but I couldn't help the feeling of sadness that nested in my heart. I had on
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I wonder if she'll recognize her son in Alex's body. I mean, obviously not right away because she wouldn't think that's even possible, but maybe she'll find it weird and recognize some of her son's qualities or behavior in Alex...
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Hey, thanks for all the comments! I hope you stick around for the journey!
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I appreciate it!
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I am really curious about who Mark is! Btw I found the bathroom scene to be kinda ridiculous. "Here, suck my dick so I can prove I'm not attracted to you!" Like, who does that? XD Other than that, another great chapter!
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Haha oh, thank you for your comments, always making me laugh! We'll soon learn more about her. Ohh you shouldn't be scared, but definitely be alert...
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That was beautiful, my friend! You introduced all characters so well, we know much about them already, but there's still things we don't know: why is Tyson suicidal? Why is Vladimir in that unit and did he do anything at his old school? It was such an emotional and bittersweet first chapter!
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Haha thank you, my friend! I'm feeling inspired so you'll probably get the next chapter sooner rather than later.
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Thank you for reading and commenting! And yes, let's hope Esthor gets his vengeance.
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Beauty's in the eye of the beholder.
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Can't say I didn't warn y'all
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Finally regaining consciousness, Esthor could feel his head pounding. It took him a few seconds to realize he couldn’t move and he struggled to open his eyes, wondering what was going on. “Ugh, what happened?” he mumbled, his voice barely audible. As he opened his eyes, he gasped in shock, seeing the king’s seven sorcerers standing in a semi-circle around him, each wearing their dark purple robes and pointing their pathetic magic scepters at him. Looking down at himself, he saw chains ar
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What's the age of the students who wrote these?
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Sweet!! These two are so cute together. Good thing to know Pip is not allergic to chocolate, he'd be missing out a lot (even tho it's not better than sex)!
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Thank you, friend Esthor definitely made his decision and he is sure that he's right. Let the speculations continue! 😛
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I like the way you think, that's all I'm gonna say right now! If I comment on anything else, I'd be spoiling the story. Some of the things you're wondering will be revealed already in the next chapter, and others a bit further down the road. I love it how you immediately assume it was Zane who knocked Esthor out. But yeah, Esthor definitely sounds like someone who'd be out for revenge, and turning him into a chicken is super satisfying!
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You may or may not be right...
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Thank you, so glad you liked it!! Your questions will be answered in the next chapter
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Slamming the door behind him, Esthor hurried up the winding stairs in his home, his midnight blue cape fluttering behind him as he walked. He opened the light wooden door opposite his bedroom and found himself in a spacious room he used for studying and practicing sorcery. The western wall was covered in books, most of which he only perused, while the eastern wall had large windows that let vast amounts of sunlight in. The center of the room was occupied by a large wooden desk whose surface
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