Awwwe poor innocent Jared. He's too pure for the family he is in. I can't wait for him to come into his own. And he's a good brother looking out for Kyle.
Dammit James what did I say last time!
OK A James... da fuck man! Anything else you want to tell us? Vestigial twin? Aliens? Super-powered clones? Jesus man!
B yeah Nan! OK so I get the $110+ for the betting pool. And that was a short and sweet trial with a couple of really weird twists.
Like an assassin man-whore, Rudolph getting some D. (Thought he'd be cuck at strangest) them just giving up and the death penalty!?
Wow! Plus New player on stage. Can't wait for the next chapter!
OK Nan at least goosing the bailiff is probably assured. And match $100 for Rudolph being himself. And for homophobic character assassins/real assassins.
EEEEEEeeeeee!!!
I might be excited.
I'm down for $20 Rudolph tries to attack.
$10 for Penelope to try and act as the caring innocent mother to an abusive husband and deviant sons.
$15 on Nan threatening in some way harming/killing both.
& $5 on someone saying that's supposed to be my money.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Wow! I thought fraud and just general ass-hole behavior was the worst of those two. I mean I have family I actually hate but killing...yeesh. And as much as I wanted hatman to suffer I can understand doing it all for the sake of saving his family. Great chapter can't wait for the next one.
OK now all I need is for the wedding to take place, assholes to be ruined by their own greed/stupidity, Nan to either tackle or sick Khan on hat guy and my reading experience will be fulfilled.
I don't know why but I'm thinking a jiangshi will appear and because of the history either be afraid or turned on by light tie up play... my mind might be a bit unhinged. Lol
Dammit Boris you unflappable beautiful bastard. Honestly I was expecting a secret passage or something like from the pool dealing with the sunlight vents.
Finally; not you writing, but I'm actually on this site and I couldn't remember the title of this story. Want to say I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
In a very STRICT Catholic High School in the south, it was about time for the senior prom. I being the only male of age to attend had been made the Art Club representative. Now my rank can the whole school hierarchy was that of outcast even of the outcasts ask. So trying to find a date was difficult to say the least. To wit I had to go with the take "mothers co-worker's daughter" to the prom.
Sadly the pick up was the highlight of the date. She was talking and conversing, but the in
I forgot about this story, and I love it but it made me angry because I had a "date" similar to this one only she (hadn't come out yet) had a boyfriend that she didn't tell me about, and was legitimately three kinds of stupid. She stalked me for about a year around college classes. I honestly might write a short story about it. Great job of the story, it just hit a bit close to home.