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Wow Oli as his son? So desperate. Oli growing up in front of our very eyes πͺ And they finally have fun as a family!
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The Return of Riley Walker
Hellsheild commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The Return of Riley Walker
Whelp I'm screwed then. I not only answer them (out loud sometimes) I'll have a full blown argument if I'm frazzled up enough. -
The Return of Riley Walker
Hellsheild commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The Return of Riley Walker
ππ€π€‘π―ππ€ΈπΊπππ ππππΆππ₯βπ π€οΌΌ(^o^)οΌ I might be happy about this. Though I may miss the Haner family while reading Blinded like I did for the inverse. -
I'm stuck in tilt lol
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π the tears are real! Mortality and love the two fastest ways to make a person leak. Cody and Lilly I weep for what they go through. The twins I weep because they are pure Blu and Kyle I weep for sharing their love with Bella in preparation for her day.
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Never had British tea, or biscuits. I've had southern biscuits, and many cookies (chews and swallows an Oreo) had green tea (non traditional), and do it yourself tea bags, and of course southern sweet tea. Wasn't a coffee drinker until I started working at the hospital, now I love it. J'accuse!
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Sometimes crazy is the best kind of entertainment. Too many families try to be straight laced and perfect. I'm betting a little mayhem is fun to witness. Damn Nan scares me putting exlax in cookies, why what did cookies ever do to her? (Also I called her getting her reckoning) I was not expecting this to go all Hatfield and McCoy though the battles may be entertaining no one will win the war...except Kasey pulling in all the dough and sweets from the fallout arguments that ensue.
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What if mom finds a hidden packet forgotten about over years like they did in a dresser? Or worse if the very rambunctious and curious Oli does? Or maybe the paparazzi hiding on the beach a helicopter or drone when they are too close to a window or in a compromising position like say after having sex for the first time in umpteen year?
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Yay! Now I'm happy, and worried. Happy that several roadblocks seem to be disappearing, but worried that the house still may have a hidden hindrance or two waiting in the wings.
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Over The Rainbow β’ Part VIII
Hellsheild commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow β’ Part VIII
wah Why! She...no. Such a short chapter, so much emotion. -
Save them. Love them. That's all they need.
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Brothers are a hard subject to tackle in writing. There is a delicate balance of loyalty, love, individuality, support, jealousy, rivalry, ego, and cohabitation. You got writing siblings down to an art. Still waiting for the death of Nate though.
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Still have my resources at the ready just when and where. And what snacks, seriously can't hide a body with no energy.
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Work together on this, just got new steel boots(bro's hand-me-downs) feel like helping me break them in?
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I feel that Liz should go after the reporter. Like a bulldog on a chain. And finally Teddy is giving in.
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π (That smug smile I feel says it all. The touchy feely the puffery the jitters. )
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It's gotta be real bad for that tough ole' bird. But sometimes a joke can be pushed too far. I can't wait for the apology and retaliation. To think that Nan would take it laying down is underestimating her. It may be a comment or untrustworthy nature towards the duo but there will be a reckoning I bet.
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Tears of joy/ sorrow / laughter my good man never stop writing. I don't know why but I feel like Katya could do someone dirty without Ivan's help. I don't care what anyone says little women can be dangerous.
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DAMN CLIFFHANGERS! Want more, need more.
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Break Ups and First Dates
Hellsheild commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Break Ups and First Dates
God damn those people! Ugh! Drop his band mates and find some other people. Ones that will appreciate his excitement and ability. God I remember getting the talk. It was at like 3 or 4, Jesus I knew what a fucking orgy was before I knew what the hell a pronoun was. That and our cousins let us watch Real Sex when we spent the night. But having a hippie, nurse explain things made it easier for my brother and I to understand. So it wasn't as awkward, but more so informative. And when you understand it and know more it desensitized us to the taboo of saying things like Penis. -
Love! Finally love. I'm not crying, you are! Oh wait you said that already.
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Love this. I like Oli is embarrassed to admit that he looks up to Teddy. Glad that the group could laugh together, though the shift of Mike being an ass to Liz being a bitch is a bit jarring. Not unfounded like Mike, but still.
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Winter: no chance no way I won't say I'm in love. Hazeth: jealousy throwing saints into the sea Andy: too busy with his mates for a song.
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Ooooooh! Love this story, keep it up.
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May have had to reread the chapter prior but now I'm back in the groove and can't wait for more. Glad you are better.
