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For a chapter I was pretty "meh" about, I think it was a necessity. There will always be the little moments like a glance in the mirror or a softly uttered "hi", that shows how the story unfolds in the emotional realm. I'm still on the learning curve of the writing world but I like to think I'm improving. Lol. Caleb belongs with Asa and his home is Texas. I think Caleb is looking forward to settling down. Their bond is irrefutable.
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That's putting it mildly.
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I'm hoping he finds a pace that is quick but doesn't hurt him.
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Well, she was held captive and tortured by Trevor who we thought was working for Cassiel but was really Kasar's bitch. That might play into her general leeriness of shifter adults. I believe that those who suffer abuse tend to want to protect others who are vulnerable if they're capable.
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Who doesn't love a good pinning? Oh... look. First on three.
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Caleb had a LOT of issues to work through. He's tackled some major ones and made great strides, but he still has a way to go both with himself and with his relationship with Vann. I still have a few insidious evil things planned where Huntington is involved.
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**slowly slinks off to edit future chapters**
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There's a lot going on with Caleb and I don't want to give anything away because I'm posting the last story and I can’t go there and ruin anything for you. So keep reading. Lol. Snorting icicles would really suck.
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Who says they won't? But, keep in mind.... Huntington targeting Sebastian’s pack is personal (full explanation is in Spirit Wolves) . Other packs may or may not want to get involved. Keep in mind, in my world, the majority of packs are small. Sebastian may not want to risk them losing anyone in their prime. We shall see how it pans out. You just gotta be patient.
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Basic commands or advance?
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Tad bit demanding? 😬 🤣 There might be a twist or three around some future corner. 🤔
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They're working on it. Diligently.
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BOOM... Nice blowback!
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Do you mean Elijah and Tyler? I'm sure they're gonna come in handy.
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When I wrote it that line just flowed naturally. The character speaks... I listen. Enya (btw I had to a 'find and replace' because I spelled it Anya lol) is still a bit of a stranger to me. She's slowly revealing more of herself so I think whenever we see her she'll surprise us with a new side of her personality.
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@astone2292 name dropped in this chapter too in the reference to an NFL linebacker, but like you said, I already went there in the last story. I didn't need to repeat.
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Thanks for saying that. When I sent it to Gnomie I told her I thought the chapter sucked. I did have to edit a good chunk of the meeting as it was too detailed with stuff that didn't matter and really had no purpose to the plot so it needed cleaning up. This is what I think of as a bridge chapter. It gets us from one place to another.
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Sebastian knows this and is now doubling down with preparations. This includes training his able-bodied pack members to fight. But this is Caleb's story so he didn't tell me to write any details about it so we have to trust that the Alpha knows what he's doing.
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Just you wait. Go ahead. Get comfy.
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Caleb's transformation had to be acknowledged. He has come a long way. You may or may not be right about Huntington.
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Since when is anything in these comments fair?
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These kids went through a lot. We need a reminder every once in a while.
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