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    Chapter 5

    Again.. sorry (not) Lyssa is pretty cool. Up there with Cassie.
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    Chapter 5

    Of course it wasn't approved. When has that ever stopped me? 🤭😆 Besides.. her name makes it too easy. There is a lot that needs to happen and all the ducks have to be lined up properly for any of this to work. Asa has his work cut out for him, but so does Caleb. It may or may not work out the way they want. I love writing a character that can one up someone else like Asa can. Lol. Asa still has family but I get the impression that he doesn't see them often. He's looking for his own. I can't (won't) tell you if it's going to be more dangerous or safer to work on Caleb because they're mates. Sorry. (Not really)
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    Chapter 5

    Like this?
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    Chapter 5

    I wasn't gonna be the one to tell him.
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    Chapter 5

    I can always count on you to throw the fast ball right down the middle. So here we go... Your 3 elements are on point. I have my doubts about Caleb returning to the Montana pack, but stranger things have happened in my stories. Vann's future is more flexible. Kids his age are uprooted all the time. But there has to be a good reason. Caleb just saying 'sorry isn't going to cut it. Ah ... elephants. I still haven't decided which circus they're going to be part of. Asa just found out about the pups when Caleb told him his history. Giles wouldn't have any reason to disclose it to the pack farrier. Don't forget.. Asa deliberately keeps himself separate from the supernatural world. Even if he heard about a disappearance (like on the podcast) he wouldn't have any reason to associate it with shifters and pups being hybrids. The extent of his healing ability and the effects on him are still a big unknown. You know I'm gonna leave you hanging. If/when it's time for the pups to be cured, I'm sure they'll figure out some way to decide who goes when.
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    Chapter 5

    We'll take it!
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    Chapter 5

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    Chapter 5

    Fixed it. You know how it asks for a reason? I put "So my beta would stop being a PITA"
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    Chapter 5

    Score one for the Team!!
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    Chapter 5

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    Chapter 5

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    Chapter 5

    Good theories. I like the way you think (plus I won't have to rewrite much... lol)
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    Chapter 5

    Why do you insist on having elephant memories??
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    Chapter 5

    Stop poking holes in the theory!! CALEB ISN'T HUMAN!!!! Nor is he a
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    Chapter 5

    Asa's healing is gonna take toll on him. In what world do I not torture my characters a tad?
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    Chapter 5

    Caleb is extremely vulnerable. His authority as an Alpha was stripped away. He doesn't have an official pack affiliation and he's probably scared of what the future holds. It remains to be seen what damages can be repaired.
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    Chapter 5

    Jezus... @astone2292 has taught you his language.
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    Chapter 5

    With that attitude the Korner Krew is gonna pull off to the side of the galaxy and dump you on the side of the road. I'm so disappointed.
  19. kbois

    Chapter 5

    You hit the nail on the head S! It all boils down to what the wolf wants.
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    Chapter 5

    Vann’s mom died. Remember? That's why Vann is with the Montana pack!
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    Chapter 5

    Aiiieeee...
  22. I hear what you're saying. We can all do better. Myself included. Sorry about the tooth. I know it's been a long, arduous journey. I don't blame Michael for nearly hitting the roof. I would too! I hope everyone has a good day!
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    Chapter 5

    Oy. I can see this issue becoming the '55 Chevy of this story. Keep in mind, Sebastian and his crew killed most of those directly involved with the whole scheme. In all likelihood whoever it is was killed in the attack on the mountain lab. Maybe.
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    Chapter 5

    Both my parents pulled it on me. I swore I'd never use it when I had kids.
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    Chapter 5

    I can picture it.
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