Sorry, if I rewrite the chapter it will take me away from working on Caleb's story. @Mrsgnomie would truly try to end my life. She would totally ruin what I have planned if she took over. Not. Going. To. Happen!
Absolutely true. I went into this knowing it was Elijah's story. Yes, it's a continuation of Spirit Wolves, but it's not a continuation of the Sentinel's story. I've never written a story so quickly as this one. It was just there.
Yes, Kage was very much aware of the brevity of his life. I'm glad he was able to live it to it's fullest during the short time they had together and that he found love. He needed it.
I have been steeling myself for months in preparation for the comments on this chapter. Believe me, I've been getting the cold shoulder from @Mrsgnomie since April, I think. @astone2292called me a "monster". @Danilo Syrtis, well, I could feel his sadness across an entire ocean.
Kage's dying was far from cold-hearted, even though it may seem that way. My heart stuttered when I wrote the chapter.
The Boss is going to make an appearance very soon. So won't Sebastian’s squad.
I'm glad you used the phrase "what if?"
That is exactly what I want my readers to be wondering. In my opinion, every good story should make the readers question 'what if'.