Puh-leeze...
I live in Florida. Flip-flop season is 365 days a year. On those rare days when it dips into the 30s I will resort to socks and cute ankle boots.
I'm happy that the chapter's about face will curb a good majority of unsolicited comments regarding my perceived issues with feet.
PEOPLE.....The ONLY good thing about feet are getting pedicures! END OF STORY!
Damn.
I think someone paid attention in class when cliffhangers was taught!
Great chapter.
The final tweaks worked out well. I have to admit, this one was a bit of a challenge to hammer it smooth, but it turned out just right!
OMG...
Everything about this chapter was spot on. The way Will handled Brad and Jake and pulled the Robbie card to make them both aware of the impact. How JP put it out there what the possible repercussions to the family could be. Even Brad pointing out how Jake was thinking about himself and he was thinking about them.
Powerful chapter. Kudos Mark!
(oh.. can't forget Stef, sending Tom off to stock up on groceries..lol)
There is a vast difference in this story and my latest one. All because I found a great beta reader and awesome editor. Both are crucial to making sure formatting and continuity is correct.
Enjoy!
I'm glad Dan is so patient with Peter. I'm not sure if I really believe in 'love at first sight', but with these two you've created the credibility that it might be possible.
I do like the direction the story is going in. Deciding to leave the church must be a very difficult decision for a priest. I think he's made the right one.
One should not be forced to choose between love (or the chance of) and whatever higher deity they believe or don't believe in.
Off to a really good start.
I'm going to refrain (for the moment) from voicing my opinion of organized religion, and specifically the Catholic church. I need to see how this plays out first.
An absolutely fun tale from new-to-GA author Tim Hobson.
It's James Bond meets Queer as Folk with an interesting cast of blokes. Tim's British flair adds a bit of spicy humor to the mix.
First in a series of three tales, this one sets the bar. Well worth turning the pages....errrrrr, rather swiping the screen for.
Great job!
Yes... I'm late to the parade again!
What a great ending to a well done, fun story. The premise of the three tales played out over the long flight is a wonderful concept.
I'm looking forward to the next installment!
The things I've heard about the Villages...OMG.... thank whatever Fates there may be that I lost my sheltered Catholic school-girl naiveté a looooonnnnngggg time ago!
I have not seen the documentary but I've heard it's interesting. My in-laws had friends who lived there a few years. They couldn't stand it and moved out.
As for the story idea?..... I already have enough fodder from managing a 55+ mobile home park.
Maybe @Mrsgnomie will tackle it.