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  1. kbois

    Celebrating Loren

    You're only pissy cuz I told you to tighten up the next chapter.
  2. kbois

    Bertie and Cecil

    Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. YES!! Probably my favorite thing you've written so far. Bertie is real. His fears are real. His image of himself is real. His self doubt is real. This story had me smiling the whole way through. I see myself in Bertie. Doesn't matter if you carry ten extra pounds or a hundred and ten. You feel judged everywhere you go. Kudos to Bertie for facing his nemesis- body image! You nailed his emotions and reactions perfectly. Cecil is amazing. Cracked me up the way Bertie twisted his words and he let it roll off him like a duck. I've had the exact same reactions as Bertie. Many times. Struggling with weight issues is a life long battle for many of us. You did a great job with this tim. Thanks! P.S. Nice to see you writing again.
  3. I just spent close to 3 hours at Urgent Care. Idiot me fell last night. No reason other that I was stupid. Did something I shouldn't have and went straight down onto my bad knee, plus whacked the other one but good. Luckily nothing is broken. Big old contusion and orders to take it easy until I can maneuver without pain. No gym for a week. I'm pissed about that more than anything. *sigh* It hurts. I'm glad I don't have to deal with snow.
  4. That's because the original title of the chapter was supposed to be Ninety-nine cents. Because I guessed it, someone had to change it. She was butt hurt cuz I was in her head. She yelled at me to get out. 😒
  5. kbois

    Celebrating Loren

    Way to bait the hook🤭🤣!
  6. kbois

    Celebrating Loren

    Twisted? Yes, I will own that one! Bitter? Nope... life's too short!
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    Celebrating Loren

    I feel a rewrite coming on!
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    Celebrating Loren

    I'll give him the page out of my playbook I used for my older son. Him; 2.5 years old. Me: when are you going to start using the potty? Him: when I'm three. Babysitter: (tries every bribe imaginable) when are you going to start using the potty?? Him: when I'm three. (this is a repetitive conversation over the next 6 months.) The morning of his third birthday: Me: (hands him underwear) You're 3 today. No diapers. Him: (after a look of incredulity that I'm calling him out on it.) Okay Mommy. One accident. (Granted he was in pull-ups at night until he was 7 or 8 cuz the kid has a bladder the size of flea and sleeps like a log) And all my friends said potty training was a bitch. 🤔🤣😆
  9. kbois

    Celebrating Loren

    Editor position for the sequel to Spirit Wolves is now open.
  10. kbois

    Celebrating Loren

    Your editors are your greatest strength.
  11. kbois

    Celebrating Loren

    Seriously.... I don't drink that much. But considering my current status of totally fu*ked up knee had nothing to do with alcohol, (Well, maybe just a smidge) it's a wonder I can walk at all today. Might be an x-ray in my immediate future with a fabricated story of why I fell. Oy.
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    Celebrating Loren

    So funny thing happened yesterday when I was going thru this. This.... Every person in the group is eating out of his hand like housebroken bunnies, In my addled brain turned into this; 'Every person in thr group is eating out of his hand like broken house bunnies. 🤣🤣 Now I can't get that weird image out of my head! Loved the chapter. Mostly feel good. They still have to face the double standard thing a bit more. They'll get there. Training camp:
  13. Too cute! I love Lindt chocolate. My sister-in-law made the mistake of introducing my kids to it when they were little. I had to switch from Hershey kisses to Lindt milk chocolate in their Xmas stockings from that point forward. I'm still required to ship it to Kansas. Spoiled kids...lol On a side note when my younger son was about 2 he got into too much chocolate that was laying around one Easter. Not pretty. That's all I'll say. 🤢
  14. Agreed. There should be an automatic contract issued when joining this group stating that fact and binding one permanently to said contract.
  15. I can't take it anymore. Recipe please.
  16. kbois

    Chapter 26

    Will more than gets around that's for damn sure. Great chapter. I'm looking forward to what tricks you have up your sleeves 😉.
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    Chapter 8

    I think you just need to take out kneeling behind Henry and it'll work. No matter how hard I tried to picture it as described, someone was bent to the point of broken limbs in my head 🤣🤣
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    Chapter 8

    Only one takeaway from this chapter and it's a puzzler: Lying on his back with his legs in the air, Lord Harry had his eyes closed and was making soft sounds of sexual delight. His heels were resting on the naked shoulders of a handsome stranger Bijan had never seen before, who was kneeling behind Henry, plowing his ass with vigor. How is Harry on his back with his legs over Winnie's shoulders, yet Winnie is kneeling behind him. Is this a Kama Sutra position?
  19. I'll have to settle for some fresh pineapple. I went to the Amish market today (in retrospect, not the brightest idea the day before a religious holiday. It was packed) They have one of those machines that peels and cores the pineapple for you. It's the same price as getting one and having to cut it up yourself. No brainer. I did have some cookies this week. My mother-in-law sends us some for every holiday. Although this batch was a little worse for wear. Mailing chocolate anything to Florida can result in disaster. The Hershey kisses melted off the peanut butter cookies. At least they fared better than the chocolate bunnies:
  20. @Reader1810 @Mikiesboy Now I want cookies. 😩 🤤
  21. Hi all! Hope everyone is doing well. I had a surprisingly pleasant customer service experience this week. A prong on my earbud charger broke and hence, wouldn't charge. I've had them 5 months, so I emailed the customer service department for the company. Three pleasant email exchanges later and the are sending me a replacement set. By far one of the easiest encounters I've had. Enjoy your weekend and if you celebrate Easter have a good day tomorrow. (I sent my older son a care package with a wind up hopping chick toy and it scared their cat...lol)
  22. Not sure. The one picture she sent me her face was shaded. Or wait... maybe it was a beard 🤔🤣 I don't judge.
  23. You know that totally went to her head.
  24. I wouldn't be surprised if Loren finds out his credit card is maxed out and he starts getting deliveries from Amazon with all sorts of crazy shit!🤣🤣
  25. Great chapter! Loren has come a long way. Yes, he freaked and tried to bail. But...... He reached out, he processed, he thought things thru and then manned up and went back to face his demons head on, only to find out the only demon is a two year old capable of swindling hundreds of dollars out of him, 99 cents at a time. You go Aido Potato!
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