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Well said, my friend. It truly puzzles me when comments such as @Talo Segura's are made. Readers, of course, are entitled to their opinions, but when those comments reflect what seems to be a cursory glance at the chapter, they often come off as being nescient. I've found that a lot of readers will read a chapter more than once, especially if it's a powerful or impactful one before they comment. Sometimes there is a lot of information to process. This story is developing quite nicely. Because of the subject matter, there is no way it can be all sunshine and rainbows. It may not be possible for Matt or Andy to ever get there, but we need to keep ourselves open to the possibilities.
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Sometimes it's good to be bad 😉
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Pretty sure it was the bad guy.
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Mr. Black isn't even sure why he allowed Andrew on board for the auction. It's been speculated that it's purely ego and a power trip.
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The beginning of this chapter is one of acceptance and hope for Andrew. He's dealing with the ramifications of what he has learned about human trafficking. Hopefully he's book will educate some of his readers. The last part of the chapter is one of acceptance and despair for Matt. He's resolved himself to his situation and knows he must endure in order to survive. Great writing tim!
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I'm not sure what they've been up to. I think Liam and Keon need a few more years to get to the point they'll talk to me.
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The story is only beginning to unfold. I find your comment indicating that the author is taking us on a "perverted journey" highly rude and offensive. If you don't like the direction the story is going... do us all a favor and stop reading.
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Good luck Rick! Take care of yourself!
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Lex has a leg up on the rest of us!
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Liam is one of my favorite characters. He's a great kid. Danny is one of those characters that I wish could have developed more, but it wasn't meant to be.
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People need to learn to mind their own damn business. The only one entitled to comment on your relationship status or weight is you. Back off Boomer. Sorry you had to deal with that ignoramus.
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Reality has come crashing down on both Andrew and Matt. They have come face-to-face with the consequences of one decision... Andy choosing to write a book about human trafficking and Matt's when he chose to hang out with Danny. It's not looking good for either of them. Great job tim!
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Great interview! I just started doing the anthologies last year and I'm so happy I did. It gives me a chance to try new things with writing and to get a story out there that might not otherwise have made it onto the site. I'm working on this year's submission and hope to finish it up soon.
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It's tim's story... he's the one who gets to decide. Plus, I think it'd appropriate that Black call Andrew by his first name. He seems like the type who has a god-like superiority complex so by being familiar it sets the tone that he knows he's the one in charge.
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Starkly honest words from Mr. Black. He is obviously a businessman who has taken advantage of an extremely niche market. He knows what he does is not morally or ethically right. He also doesn't care. His attitude makes one wonder what happened in his life to allow him to get to where he's at. Excellent chapter, my friend.
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They are a great couple.
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Probably, although I suck at chess and bungee jumping would have to be for a reeeaaaaalllyyyyy good cause. I think I'd prefer skydiving over bungee jumping... at least I'd be strapped to someone else who knew what they were doing.
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Nice try. Maybe if you have your groomer clip your nails you might be able to type better.
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Who is this Kane you keep referring to?
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Excellent build up to the upcoming auction, tim. Would I go to such lengths for a story? I'm not sure. If I knew that it would make a huge difference... maybe.
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I'm sure it'll come back to you. It's always nice revisiting old stories.
