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Beautifully written, it made feel 'fuzzy' all over and brought a tear or two to me eyes at the end, well actually I blubbed. Now I want to read more of your work, thank you.

oh fuck, Tom's eating noodles WHINA

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The variety of responses to this shows how much of an emotive topic this can be. I based my response on living in world no and how it was in the past. From that perspective Gay only and Gay friendly establishments are wanted and needed, due to both feelings of comfort and belonging as well as feelings of discrimination. Yes there is some reverse discrimination mainly brought about by self preservation which is natural. The need and possibly the want will not go away until acceptance is total, but total acceptance is probably being idealistic and may never happen. It certainly won't in my lifetime. One thing that doesn't help is the straight people that go to gay clubs and bars and then complain and cause trouble because they don't like to see gay people showing affection. This is happening more and more in the UK, what the hell do they expect? If they don't like it then don't bloody go there. My point of acceptance is idealistic and probably will never happen. That being the case, Gay only and Gay friendly will always be wanted and needed.

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I'm always sceptical of stories set in the future but this one drew me by it's realistic outlook on what could happen. It takes skill to draw in the sceptic, but to get the sceptic hooked takes brilliance. Everyone should read and enjoy.

This has been an eventful journey,I'm glad that Dave found happiness in the end, I'd have loved to have seen Jae with Dave but true to life you can't have everything. I've enjoyed the journey and would love to read more.

I just don't know what to say great writing as always but you killed Jae, I just hope that Terry can make Dave happy

Great writing great story telling, but the of this chapter I'm gutted, I hope Dave can get past this

If Dave doesn't find Jae you will have me to answer to I like them together 😤

Wow I'm loving the excitement, but I'm also feeling for Dave and jae, yes I'm hooked now.

You have just explained why I'm drawn in this is skillful writing, mikiesboy has drawn in the sceptic and I'm enjoying the journey.

Well, you've done it, you've drawn me in, I'm definitely starting to like it.

I'm getting drawn in, I think I might like it

Brilliantly written with so much empathy for those with a disability, it makes you forget the disability and see the person and his story, totally loved it.

I'm not sure how much I will like this one but that's because I don't usually go for stories set in the future, but this one seems different and piques my interest, I know I need to read more, this story feels more realistic and plausible. Nicely written.

You did it this chapter, you made me cry as they finished the half marathon. That was a great read.

I get closer to tears with each chapter if you make me cry I'll never... Yeah I will forgive you this is bloody good.

I'm loving it you can't help but feel the emotions.

This relationship has its mojo back yay.

Looks like we need to keep a close eye on both Harry and Myriam, just like real life there's never a dull moment.

It looks like things will get back to normal, or as close as they can, I'm liking it.