Forevermotion
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Loved this. What a beautiful story.
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Well that was interesting.
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I think I spent 33 mins just laughing my head off at the ending. Brilliant. But, I think they made a good decision. Although I wonder how many assassination attempts he will experience. Hopefully with Konstantin as the head of the military Shay and Mira should be able to be able to breath.
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Okay. I think I just answered my own question from last chapter.
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Ugh I'm confused. Who is the brother that Shay was talking about when he was "interrogating" the Arbiter? Wait. Second thought. Could the "brother" be the two brothers that split the people of the Yugon race when the Matriach was telling her story? And would that mean that it wasn't Shay speaking? Or I could be wrong. 😀
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Finally reunited. I'm wondering, will Yugan meet up with boys?
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Awesome. Onto the next!
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That was a hard chapter to read. Very emotional. But, you did it justice.
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Exactly. What you said is what I like about stories that go down this route in the storytelling. Yes it's sad. But when done right, related to the plot and progresses the storyline then it's worthwhile. I'm loving this story so far. Mira is badass and I like to read his scenes. I think they provide a differnet PoV.
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I'm on the fence here. I read you're comment on the discussion about death being something that can happen to any character other than Shay and I was surprised that Mira came back. A happy surprise but surprised still the same. I'm glad he came back. Although I'm sad when it happens but when people die that is related to the plot then I think it can help a story progress with people mourning and moving on when it's done right. I hope this is understandable as sometimes I try to say what I want but doesn't make sense.
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So far from what I've read. You've got it spot on. Living it so far. Can't put it down.
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That was a perfect first kiss. Cute. Although it's now to late. I like to read romantic qnd physical sex. But like some readers have said, it's better when it doesn't take over the story.
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I kinda want to see vinal really angry. I think it would be cool to see.
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Kotik's Birthday. Part 3
Forevermotion commented on Demented's story chapter in Kotik's Birthday. Part 3
A good end for 'season 1' I have no clue how the can stop people from taking him. -
Kotik's Birthday. Part 2
Forevermotion commented on Demented's story chapter in Kotik's Birthday. Part 2
Does that mean the king be coming for him? -
Kotik's Birthday. Part 1
Forevermotion commented on Demented's story chapter in Kotik's Birthday. Part 1
Good chapter. -
Man that was awesome. Baldric hot his ass handed to him by daddy in law. Ha!! So good.
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Wow. You know at first I wasnt really sure about this story until this chapter. This whole chapter was excellent and I cant wait to read more. Awesome!!
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Loved it.
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Perfect way to show their love.
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I have read this story before and enjoyed it. Gonna read it again.
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I've never really been a fan of harry potter but I did enjoy this. I love the politics and I really liked how you brought all the battles to life. Brilliant.
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Chapter 1 - Orrin's 15th Ring
Forevermotion commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Orrin's 15th Ring
Cool new story Comicality. Can't wait during more! -
That last paragraph was beautiful.
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Really good. Gonna love reading more.
