Mrsgnomie
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You know how I feel about diggin' around and 'fact checking' things in Boss Nanny, yet here you go. You're about to join @kbois on my shit list.
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I've been waiting for someone to connect the .99 but no one did! Or maybe they did but just didn't comment. The comments are truly the highlight of each chapter. It's an added value, one for which I'm thankful that everyone is willing contribute.
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Funny enough, I also don't like football or influencers. There's several things that @kbois has had to correct me on (when it comes to football). It's been a challenge.
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You know that one chapter where that thing happens with Aidan? When Jay and Loren visit CO? Yeah...
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No, most people have such wonderful editors and Beta. I guess I just really hit the lottery... Me every time @kbois says "send it my way"
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It's fun. I'm excited for it.
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I feel like this would be Loren's luck. He'd simply walk Aidan through the process/expectations like it's the first day of the job and Aidan would simply do it. Would Matt and Seamus be sooo pissed? lol
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Yes, the one word I would describe @kbois is humility.
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I think Loren potty training Aidan would be worth it's own chapter.
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You're right. @Mawgrim is great.
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I know my strength and my weaknesses! lol
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That's because both @84Mags and @weinerdog are insightful AF.
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I think Loren enjoys that what he and Jay share online is just a natural progression of their life together. If they start planning it out, then it becomes forced. I think the quote from last chapter where his friend says that Jay is content because he's in his life, and not in his life because he's content, rings true here.
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Lets be real, this is my first story without a lot of unnecessary drama. I'm kind of enjoying. Not that there won't be some wrenches thrown in, but I don't *think* they're insane or unrealistic.
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Forget character archs and plot development, pacing and story advancement is probably the thing I spend the most time on lol
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Good talks don't always happen right when the event takes place. Some people need to sit on it for a while. Some people is Loren. Loren needs to sit on it. But look at him, I think he did it justice.
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Were you worried that it was too many chapters or not enough? At times, it feels like both lol.
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@kbois has given me much drunken material to work with. All that whiskey finally coming in clutch.
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Jay is awesome. The next chapter is fun! Loren has come a long way. I love the way he develops, like a good role of film.
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Broken house bunny? Is that like a scorned Hugh Hefner Gf?
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chapter sixteen jay “Whoa…” Matt’s mouth drops as we pass Loren’s house. Cars line both sides of the street and there’s not an open spot to be seen. Having foresight, Loren bribed his elderly neighbor to let us park in their driveway. I open the back door and try to unbuckle Aidan, but with Matt and Seamus back, he wants nothing to do with me. He leans away from me and starts whining, much to Matt’s amusement. Said person struts up and shoulders me out of the way like
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They captured a bit of him throughout the week. His fame will grow as the story unfolds. In fact, it's touched a little bit in tomorrows chapter.
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It only gets better (I think)...Until it gets worse...
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