Mrsgnomie
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I feel like this would be Loren's luck. He'd simply walk Aidan through the process/expectations like it's the first day of the job and Aidan would simply do it. Would Matt and Seamus be sooo pissed? lol
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Yes, the one word I would describe @kbois is humility.
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I think Loren potty training Aidan would be worth it's own chapter.
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You're right. @Mawgrim is great.
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I know my strength and my weaknesses! lol
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That's because both @84Mags and @weinerdog are insightful AF.
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I think Loren enjoys that what he and Jay share online is just a natural progression of their life together. If they start planning it out, then it becomes forced. I think the quote from last chapter where his friend says that Jay is content because he's in his life, and not in his life because he's content, rings true here.
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Lets be real, this is my first story without a lot of unnecessary drama. I'm kind of enjoying. Not that there won't be some wrenches thrown in, but I don't *think* they're insane or unrealistic.
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Forget character archs and plot development, pacing and story advancement is probably the thing I spend the most time on lol
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Good talks don't always happen right when the event takes place. Some people need to sit on it for a while. Some people is Loren. Loren needs to sit on it. But look at him, I think he did it justice.
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Were you worried that it was too many chapters or not enough? At times, it feels like both lol.
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@kbois has given me much drunken material to work with. All that whiskey finally coming in clutch.
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Jay is awesome. The next chapter is fun! Loren has come a long way. I love the way he develops, like a good role of film.
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Broken house bunny? Is that like a scorned Hugh Hefner Gf?
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chapter sixteen jay “Whoa…” Matt’s mouth drops as we pass Loren’s house. Cars line both sides of the street and there’s not an open spot to be seen. Having foresight, Loren bribed his elderly neighbor to let us park in their driveway. I open the back door and try to unbuckle Aidan, but with Matt and Seamus back, he wants nothing to do with me. He leans away from me and starts whining, much to Matt’s amusement. Said person struts up and shoulders me out of the way like
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They captured a bit of him throughout the week. His fame will grow as the story unfolds. In fact, it's touched a little bit in tomorrows chapter.
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It only gets better (I think)...Until it gets worse...
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Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
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@weinerdog picture of me
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Makes you feel for Loren. He's so accomplished and millions of people all over the world idolize him. But he's just a guy with his own issues. No better and no worse than anyone else.
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@Tonyr this could definitely be what's confusing you. Shawn, Garrett, and Marcus are Jay's teammates/friends. Seamus (Matt), Will, and Scott are Jay's friends from college and they live in CO.
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I'm not sure when I said that. Jay lives in Seattle, obviously, as he's a player for the Seattle Seahawks. Loren lives in Puyallup, WA. Seamus and Matt live in CO with the rest of Jay's friends. In the last chapter Jay and Loren fly to CO from where they live in WA. Seamus picks them up from the airport (Remember, Loe got waylaid by fans wanting tips and tricks of the trade) Also in the last chapter, when Matt and Seamus drop Aidan off, Matt says “We planned to stay and walk you through everything but our flight was delayed, twice. If we don’t leave now, we’ll miss our ferry." I'm not sure where the confusion is from.
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