Kyan wouldn't get mad. He's an understanding guy. He wouldn't care that the entire family knows and no one has clued him in... that wouldn't bug him at all...
I will specify that my "not good-ish" quality lean towards some of the tedious technical stuff and grammar. I have improved, but it was never my strong suit in school nor did I care or think I would ever need to know that stuff "in the real world". Well, jokes on me!!
Can't be too careful with side characters! Not that Max was ever just a write-off character, thank god, but you never know who the readers will attach to. Scary stuff lol