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Mrsgnomie

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  1. Max will be taken care of, but stay tuned. We will see a little sneak of his personal life.
  2. I think Kyan would have done everything in his powers to make it a good life, but to what expense?
  3. I am food motivated
  4. Kids will forever be underestimated. It's part of their power.
  5. Me every time you leave a comment
  6. I agree. I think it was easy for him to miss because he was so busy with tiny babies. Once he had his head abovr water and was able to truly give back to Perry’s friendship, he would have seen what was happening. But then again, Dayna might’ve been good at hiding it. She did make Kyan feel like he wanted them to be friends while also keeping a distance.
  7. Jed doesn’t always have a lot to say, but when he does, you know it comes from the heart.
  8. He may have left Max not feeling better, but processing tough emotions isn’t always instantaneous
  9. Trust me, we don’t want to know. Okay… We kind of want to know.
  10. Me thinks Jed’s king bed time has something to do with it… “Grandpa said we have to be ‘nited! Remember? Now hold my hand,” he demanded, gritting his teeth as he tried to grab her hand.
  11. It worked. You're here.
  12. Kyan was not going to let this best him. He was done fighting. There had to be a better way. He took a deep breath through his nose and clenched his fists, then grabbed the mattress off the bed, wrangled a bungee cord-clips around it, and secured to the corners of the sleeping bag. When he finished fastening the bedding to the mattress, he laid it back on the frame and gazed at his handy work. Sure, it looked a little medieval, better suited for a psychiatric ward than a child’s
  13. Woah, woah, woah. Careful. We do not compliment @kbois on this page.
  14. Haha. They got deleted. It was a fiasco lol. The moral of the story is that it’s best to let readers create their own image unless the author has universally hot pictures available. Average people need not apply.
  15. Mrsgnomie

    Chapter 4

    Get in line behind @84Mags and myself.
  16. Umm... there is nothing "controversial" about either of those. They are amazing.
  17. I stand corrected.
  18. Someone around here needs to be humble.
  19. Part one is Kyan's life with Dayna (kids, death, grief, etc) Part two symbolizes a new chapter of his life and the evolving relationship with Perry, hence the addition of Perry's POV. It's not divided into parts for some big cliffy/climax. It's a symbolism for change.
  20. Is that why we're here?
  21. Not by choice!
  22. Slowly but surely. Slower now, because I will only be posting on Thursday... The last two chapters I had written ended up being complete re-writes. I need to finish dialing them in and then I'm writing from scratch until the story is finished (while working FT and two kids with activities. Girl needs a few days to get caught up.) Oh, and I'm trying (and failing at the moment) to pull together my Anthology that is due in 12 days.
  23. No hate. I know it feels like a slow burn, and to some degree it is, but at the same time, is it? Kyan built a family, lost his wife, grieved his wife, found life without his wife, realized his attraction to Perry and is now dealing with that. Him and Perry only hooked up at the end of November...it is now the beginning of January. That is not a lot of time to come to terms with all this situation encompasses. Sure, in fairy tail land, maybe. Life doesn't always happen accelerated.
  24. Welcome to the waiting club. It is terrible. And the worst part? Might go to once a week posting until the end of the story now that my pre-written chapters are running out.
  25. It's easy to forget how young they are. Good or bad, Dayna was so young. 18y girls (and boys) are not known for making the best decisions/choices. They are not fully developed. And you're 100% correct. Kyan does have the chance to mature. Dayna will never grow older than 22.
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