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    Good for Geron Kees lol
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    What can I say? I have a style. Yeah. They suck. Well, that's a complicated answer. This story was kind of written in my head in two parts, but as I neared the end, I do feel like there will be a follow up story. So it's possible there are two parts and two stories.
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    Nope, that's what happens in your realm of crazy. I have built a community of peace, respect, and understanding.
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    Who doesn't love a good ride?!
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    3 kids over ten years isn't crazy. 4 kids in less than 5 is definitely bordering insanity. But if you have your first baby at 18, followed by a set of twins shortly after, anything is possible lol I'm glad you're here. See you Thursday!
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    You're so sweet. Grief is so tough, and everyone's experience with it varies greatly, which makes it hard to cover. I do hope to do it justice, and I hope to honor Dayna. Will be posting twice a week, God willing.
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    Omg. You're so sweet.
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    A good story reads like the stock market. It will get better...and then worse...and then better.
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    I don't, because I'm nice. But don't abuse my kindness.
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    I shouldn't be hungry after reading about street pizza but I am.
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    I… I cannot make any promises.
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    Kurt is not going to fare well.
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    ⚠️ drama ahead ⚠️
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    It’s impossible to do grief any justice. What a beast. But I’m glad I can try.
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    I can’t imagine. It won’t be easy.
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    That would require you to have feelings…
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    C’mon, we all know who @kbois is.
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    You commented awfully fast... Parenting is hard even WITH a village.
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    Kyan opened the passenger door and held his hands out. Despite the dark circles under her eyes and her shivers in the shockingly cool June afternoon, Dayna was radiant. “Easy,” he coaxed as he helped lift to her feet. Moving after a cesarean delivery was not to be messed with. Thanks to the twins, Dayna was all but forced to have another one with Gracie. They had fought for a v-back, a vaginal delivery after a C-section, but Gracie was breech, and Dr. Salomon didn’t want to chance any compl
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    Kyan can’t imagine ever moving on. With four small kids, what would that even look like? Surely not his best friend and brother-in-law; the man who drops off groceries, forces him to confront his depression, loves his kids unequivocally, and supports him without question.
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    I think the story premise is excellent, and the ending is thought provoking. It definitely garners a bit of sympathy for the perpetrator, not a lot, but some. it definitely makes me sad for them. Generational bigotry hard to break, paired with abuse and mental illness. Sheesh. Lots to unpack! It had a very clinical writing style, which could very well be the authors intent, but it was all telling and no showing, which made it hard for me to invest myself into the story and the characters the way I would have liked, given it was a good storyline/plot.
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    Chapter 1

    Mrsgnomie commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I really enjoyed this story! It’s funny because this isn’t my typical genre and yet I always enjoy them. I should really read more of it. The author did a great job maximizing 5k words, which is impressive. I would definitely read more if additional chapters were ever made available. All the previous comments are spot on. Great job Author, you nailed it.
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