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Mrsgnomie

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  1. You always find the best ones
  2. No. But he will convince himself that all is well,
  3. Two chapters left, do I have time to sneak in one more cliffy?
  4. Ah thank you! I always get nervous when people read this story. In one sense, it's my favorite (because it's my first) but it's hard to read because I can see so many things I'd do differently now. But I won't touch it because it serves a purpose.
  5. chapter thirty-one loe The breeze isn’t enough to ease the sting of the sun against my skin. I’d rather be in the snow, cruising the slopes but here I am instead, lounging by the pool, earbuds in, music blasting loud enough that I can momentarily pretend I’m not sharing the next two weeks with two dozen people. At what point does it turn from a normal vacation to a seriously fucked up National Lampoon Vacation? Asking for a friend. Something passes in front of the sun,
  6. MrsG knows everything
  7. SO MUCH FUN!!
  8. Isn’t THAT about the best compliment ever. I was a lot of drama back in 2017 when I wrote this. Glad you’re enjoying my epically long chapters. It’s why you HAVE to write a running commentary
  9. Mrsgnomie

    Chapter 1

    This is a great start. Mawgrim is right, the details are awesome. It’s those small things that make the story. Looking forward to following along.
  10. Where is that eye roll reaction button?
  11. Awww, you're too kind. lol
  12. I love that @mfa607 was like "Another ready through, hot chapter" and the very next comment is the least sexy scene of the entire 8k words lol. I'm dead.
  13. And I suck at writing horror stories so I’m not sure this would work out for me as a writer lol.
  14. Definitely. They already talked in a previous chapter about things looking different than they have. The new coffee shop will take a lot of their time and a bit of their focus, but he’ll still be posting everyday. It’s probably so engrained in him he wouldn’t know how to. And yes, so much power. I can’t even… 🤯🤯🤯
  15. Mrsgnomie

    Chapter 1

    No, but yumm!!!! also, I’m cringing that you’re reading this story.
  16. Thank you! That's so kind. I'm just glad you're enjoying the ride.
  17. It was the hardest thing I've ever done. 1,000 word stories should be banned. I've been toying with turning this into a story of it's town. Friends to lovers. Maybe.
  18. The next one is a good one. Probably one of my favorites. I cannot wait to post it.
  19. Definitely. They both have. I only said Loren because he was the one in question for that particular statement.
  20. Myapapaya is too down to earth. She'd hate it. Way too flashy.
  21. Loren when asked to clean:
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