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  1. Larry Davis
    So far, I have written dialogue for 38 scenes. I have 18 more.
  2. Larry Davis
    I developed my characters based on my personal life. For example, Jeremih, the main character of my novel is basically me. He's a cashier He has a fro He was in love with another cashier. those qualities are basically me.
  3. Larry Davis
    Jealously is a recipe for disaster
  4. Larry Davis
    The reason why I'm writing this book is show gay love from an intellectual perspective rather than a sexual perspective.
  5. Larry Davis
    So far, I have 57 scenes for my book. Is that too much or too much less?
  6. Larry Davis
    even though Michael and Kendall are together, I think that Michael needs to get over his jealousy towards Chet.
  7. Larry Davis
    Why did Michael feel the need to Kendall to go the hospital with no underwear on? lol🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
  8. Larry Davis
    For me, I am writing a romance novel. That means I am writing a book with romantic elements to it. However, I am trying to doing in a different being adding racial, intellectual, and historical elements to it.
  9. Larry Davis
    the first group of phrases were boring and expect, however the second choice of phrases were much better. www.facebook.com/tooocoool4skoool/
  10. Larry Davis
    During the time in which I was writing last night, I ran across a show called "The Cromarties". At first, I didn't want to watch it because it seemed to be another boring reality show. However, once I start to watch it, I began to like the show. Do you ever find yourself distracted by the TV while writing? www.facebook.com/tooocoool4skoool/
  11. Larry Davis

    Chapter 9 All In

    Larry Davis commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 9 All In

    ooh things are finally heating up. Kendall and Michael remind me Noah and Wade from "Noah's Arc".
  12. Larry Davis
    To be honest, I don't know the difference between a club and a forum. All I know is that a forum is a place where like minded people share like minded perspectives
  13. Larry Davis
    Check this out. A couple of days ago, I wrote three scenes worth of dialogue and forgot to save it. Now, I have to start over again. I'm pissed. Have you all ever been through the same thing?
  14. Larry Davis
    Oh so now Kendall is fighting for his man? Come on now. This is love
  15. Larry Davis
    seven chapters later, and we're still talking about the way Kendall acted once he told Michael that he had a crush on him? Come on now, Kendall and Michael just need to fall in love already.
  16. Larry Davis
    In a crime novel, I'd rather have the main character as the killer because it gives them the most power (novel told in first person)
  17. Larry Davis
    When it comes to dialogue, I use an outline. Do you?
  18. Larry Davis
    I can totally relating to Michael. Being someone who cares about someone whose in enjoying their time with someone else.
  19. Larry Davis
    The one thing that I will say is that a mother always know when their son is gay keep up the good write
  20. Larry Davis
    Could you write a romantic scene with this picture here?
  21. Larry Davis
    I'm glad Chet came into the picture. That way, Kendall can stop crying over Micheal. Oh, I forgot, he still is. LOL Keep up the good write.
  22. Larry Davis
    Michael is giving Kendall all of the signs and Kendall still doesn't catch the hint. Michael is love with Kendall and the feeling is reciprocated. Keep up the good write!!!!!
  23. Larry Davis
    No prob
  24. Larry Davis
    Let me just start off by saying that I don't like Cassie because she's desperate and thirsty. Second of all, I loved the fact that Michael was willing to his personal feelings aside to resolve the tension between him and Kendall. Keep up the good work!!!!!!
  25. Larry Davis
    Sure will
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