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God another one not finished, how did Spencer react when his Dad finally arrived? Did Sanchez and Frye survive?
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Oh man Preston needs saved, why didn't you finish this with the military saving him before shelter.
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Chapter 1 - Dash After Dark
James B. commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Dash After Dark
I'd be really worried for Preston's safety if I hadn't read Shelter first, but really wish I read this 1st though. -
Chapter 3 - "One Bad Apple"
James B. commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 3 - "One Bad Apple"
I too am glad Donavon is safe and really hoping and praying Stephen is still alive, but fear he may not be as was to meet Donavon. -
Chapter 3 - No Sign Of A Savior
James B. commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 3 - No Sign Of A Savior
I'm so glad I found these little stories about these kids. I just finished Shelter last night and decided to see what more you wrote and ran on to these. Know I get to know the back stories on these kids. -
Hoping Elias can now remain safe with Orson and the group at camp, but I guess we'll have to see.
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First the bear, then the problem with Harry's kid, now this Danny. I'm truly worried for Elias. I seriously hope nothing bad happens. Damn is it Wednesday yet?
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Very Happy & Loving chapter although I fear something happened bad to Elias. Looking to hear more of Elias story.
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Hmmmm, wonder if Don had anything to do with Alex and Luke's disappearance? I wouldn't put it past Don. At first I though maybe the Pastor was pressing charges against Robbie. I think Robbie needs to get over Nathan and give Connor a chance. I myself think Connor is a better choice.
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Epilogue and Author's Note
James B. commented on kbois's story chapter in Epilogue and Author's Note
Thank You for the great stories and hope to see more from you in the future. You did a marvelous job. -
Thank Goodness for the coming epilogue just not wanting this story to end, but as said all good things must come to an end.
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(Fair warning... this chapter covers three holidays. There will be mentions of food. I promise that I didn't overdo it!) Just to be fair you coved for holidays. Halloween is a holiday in my book. LoL 😁😁😁😁😁😁 Anyway somewhere down the road after this story is done I hope you find to a story on Liam and Keon. Great job with the chapter.
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I feel as if Ezra is up to something. I also feel Artie's grandparents are behind it all somehow. I mean think about. Ezra wasn't in Artie's life but suddenly he was at the custody hearing when Artie's grandparents were trying to get him. Now Ezra is putting doubts in Artie's head aboút San Francisco, the way his mother raised him to believe and when Mason mentioned Dizzy staying with Artie's Ezra didn't seem to care for that and the call from Sarah. It's just adding up. We'll see if Artie's get wise to it all I guess. Thanks for posting this chapter, I was beginning to think we would never get to read more o this story. I was beginning to give up on it. Thank God I didn't.
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OMG! Absolutely beautiful chapter, I felt as if I was there. Of course I had years in my eyes for the couple's but also for Liam and his surprise. Best chapter yet.
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So sad about poor Orsen to lose his dream and leg, but at least he's still alive. Glad Clay is alive, I know reading the chapter title I was afraid to read this chapter. Maybe, just maybe Orsen will show up at camp refuge with Clay. He could help there and still have his dream of helping people.
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I absolutely loved how Nash handled the situation with Kyle. I'll bet Kyle's wishing he'd kept his mouth shut now. I see divorce in his future. 😁
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A great chapter as usual. You had me a little scared there with Clay and Orson being in the cop car. All I could think of was something bad was gonna happen with the street gangs and one or both were gonna be hurt or killed. I was relieved nothing happened. I was jumping for joy when you jumped back to the camp with Greg and Mason, then when you went back to Clay at home I was breathing again cause I knew he was safe.
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The more I read it, the more I Love it.
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Loved this chapter, I loved the Liam & Cassie showdown, I believe she has met her match with Liam. Can't wait for more. Looking for more between Keon & Liam. If they make it I can see a future story between these two. Looking to see how Liam handles Jarrens family & his new home one he gets to Jarrens. You are doing beautifully with this story.
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After finding out Jeremy has HIV I can say I was shocked. I won't say I wasn't. I was more hopeful for Jeremy and Mason especially after Mason handled it the correct way. He didn't walk away from Jeremy. After all Jeremy didn't ask for the HIV any more than anyone would ask for any other deadly disease. I am now looking more forward to this story than ever. I can say it will be the first story I have read here that deals with this topic. Sure I have read other stories here that deal with death because of diseases, murder, suicide, accidental. Now after reading this chapter it is gonna be hopeful for romance and Love between Jeremy and Mason. Thank you for bringing this story to life.
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I can't wait to hear from Liam, I Love that kid.
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I do agree, I've known people who have lost family around the holidays. It puts a damper on them and there joyous. I myself have lost 3 cousins to a car accident at the beginning of December 15 years ago. It was her, her husband and oldest child, her other 2 children were in the car with them as well and luckily survived but not with out serious complications and lots of surgery's. Although it is still hard on the surviving to children they make it through it with the help of the rest of family and there children and the good times they had with there parents. So again you did a marvelous job with the way you ended this book. I was thinking maybe at the start of the next book you could do a POV from each her 3 children and how they coped with the death after.
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I absolutely cried when Julie passed away, it was mostly because she was able to spend one last holiday with her children. You ended this story beautifully. I'm looking forward to the next book and will be patiently waiting. Thank You for bringing us the Curries and letting us be apart of there lives.
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Chapter 126 The Biggest Lie Ever
James B. commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 126 The Biggest Lie Ever
I really can't stand Don, he's so damn manipultive. He's only making Robbie's life more miserable. If Sue buys his BS then she as stupid has he is. On the subject of cheating I don't and won't put up with it for any reason. Cheat once on me your gone that's all there is to it. I'm completely monogamous when in a relationship and I expect the same. I also think Robbie needs to check on his finances, I know it says done can't get his hands on it, but I'm sure he'd can figure out somehow.
