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    Sci-Fi
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    Washington DC

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  1. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 1

    Second pass for this story - lots of smiles!
  2. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 1

    So far, this story is a great example of the exhilarating and glorious delights of adolescent friendships.
  3. GanymedeRex

    Alo Chapter 9

    quokka does that a lot in these stories. The irritating people are usually very obnoxious, rude and don't follow common sense - they do what they were told not to and serve as an opportunity for the protagonist to tell them off. The bad guys at 100% wrong and the protagonist is 100% in the right - they bad guys get shamed and slammed with consequences. Same thing in the story about the young guy on the boat who travels between Australia, NA and Falkland Islands. It worked before but is wearing thin - I recommend another approach to introducing complications. Fun story so far.
  4. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 15

    It was worth the wait!
  5. That was kind of fun! The Tampa series is great. Id like to see Giles go mostly because he's a boring character to date.
  6. Nice details about Tampa (I'm visiting here now!!, the reason I chose this story series today) - Robert seems kind of fast - tattoo and lots of sexual experience for a 16 year old. I assume we will be learning more about his background in Boston...
  7. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 3

    Dad is a control freak, but Richie is unhinged also. His perspective may have some distortions....
  8. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 21

    It makes my day when a chapter of this story comes out.
  9. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 20

    I agree on paper edits - usually I use the screen and only do a printout once. That printout helps though.
  10. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 20

    Some of the guys are right about reviewing a print out - it really makes a difference. I write electronic documents all the time - we are blind to details in our own writing. When I print it out to read, I always find things that suddenly appear obvious. Don't worry about the environment, paper is a crop (wood pulp) and paper yielding trees are planted as a crop, just with a longer time cycle than corn or wheat. So, if you use paper, you are actually causing MORE trees to be planted. Kind of ironic, eh? Use of paper is an energy expenditure, its not like people are chopping down forests to make memo pads or anything.
  11. GanymedeRex

    AP Chapter 24

    This was an amazing story - I loved it. I will raise a glass to you for a job well done. I've looked up the locales. I will miss the places and people from the story. It was informative and inspiring to see how pioneers built their future from scratch.
  12. GanymedeRex

    AP Chapter 22

    looks like a village is forming, despite Edwins wishes.
  13. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 11

    Interesting. Janice still has a long life ahead of her - the future can still turn out bright
  14. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 19

    Wow! I was just truly surprised. That doesn't happen very often. This story has been unique and delightful! I'm happy to continue buying DK's works on amazon, but I hope he feeds some public material now and then too.
  15. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 12

    Yay. Happy ending!
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