Layne

nice chapter like always 😀

I’m so sad to see it end definitely one of my favorite stories. You did an amazing job writing this !!! ❤️❤️❤️

I feel Noah’s mom should, it’s already been some time since he came out to her. I feel if she truly loves her son, she should. I love how Jordan is ready to spend his life with Noah. It honestly made me cry when he proposed. Their love has grown strong now even through all the obstacles they went through to get there.

A poem never felt so true... amazing!

I love how your poetry provokes emotions. This particular poem is deep.

I am so happy that Noah and Jordan are rebuilding their relationship where things left off. They are happier together!!! 😊 I also like how Noah is becoming more comfortable in being himself in public.

I like how it ends.

Nice chapter! I love your style of writing and the characters.

Poor Noah... but Jordan seems happy now. I know Noah is hurting because he loved Jordan.

I hope you’re okay now. You’re right abusive fathers have no right to mercy not after all the damage they cause. They always find a problem in everything and nothing is ever good enough for them. Grew up with one too and he could never admit his faults. Always tried to play the good guy yet behind doors he would hit us until our bodies were bruised as children.

I feel so bad for Zach and Brody. Zach has been through hell, hell that isn’t even his fault yet he blames himself constantly. Hopefully one day Zach will be able to cope...😢

This chapter was sad. Noah’s parents reaction shocks me! How can they say that to their own son and not be willing to accept him for who he is? The reality is that this happens all the time when children come out to their parents... 😢

Amazing story